Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
On the surface, Internet becomes a needful instru ment in the human life at once. Nowadays, we are looker on the effectiveness and importance of Internet in our life. Anyone cannot ignore this facility in their routine task, and thus cannot claim that without Internet everyone is able to lead a comfortable life. Indeed, some people believe that the appearance of Internet in the human life has been a revolution in the level of society’s knowledge. When we discuss about anything, it is better to consider the pros and cons of the issue. Accordingly, we can suppose Internet like a knife, regarding to its behavior. On the one hand one can use knife in a criminal manner, but on the other, one can use in a acceptable manner, namely at surgery, at cooking to name but a few. Basically, Internet is a gate to reach a lot of information about everything and technically, Internet is a vital instrument for exchanging money in the big economical events now.
When someone spend too much time in internet in a wasteful manner. In fact, he or she wastes their beneficial lifetime. In this regard, quoting from Charles Darwin that says “A man who dares to waste one hour of time has not discovered the value of life.”. we can mention by adopting this quotation, internet can appear in criminal side of knife. Moreover, when children want to use internet by oneself. As usual, there is concerning about what are they accosting in internet. If they search improper information with respect of their age category and track indecent links, our concerning can become a prior. The information that is reached from internet probably include with a wrecking data or files; therefore, it is bringing a threaten for us. Still, thank to kind of software that so-called “Anti-virus”, everyone can take out a lots of this threaten by oneself. Usually the information is being offered in a devious shape for the sake of devil’s wished, and it is being transferred fault data to users; consequently, it cans destroy fundamental of human’s knowledge.
Conversely, other side of internet is so beneficial and likewise The world galloping on the line of improving day in, day out, as well as the transfer of information is owing to internet and its options. Thus, Internet cans converting to a big base for all of human’s activities. For instance, Everyday many scientists in all of the world use internet for finding data along their research’s topics and most educational classes in all the world pass off with aid of internet’s facilities. with the result that, the rate of progressing in the educational process has been increased. Also, internet makes available a few ways to commission virtual communications in field of social conversation. Thanks to these facilities all of the people simply enough to buy a smart phone or other devices that can connect to internet; Then, they can have virtual conversation with each other at everywhere. Everyone want to lead perfect life, so hard-fought attempting for catching this. Thus, next profit of internet is sharing ideas. A few websites give specific facilities to share ideas in the field of namely architecture design, mechanical design, effective method on managing, and name but a few. these ideas were gathered in same place that so-called “Data-Base”, and when users cooperate with these websites they can share own ideas along improving this, and in the long run this data will become a ripeness data and it will bring good effect in human’s lifestyle. On top of everything else, one of the signification internet roles are economical exchanging, in all of the world do a lots of economical task and exchanging with internet all day long. In this regard, many big and successful company affiliate their business to internet and its option. Due to, we can say internet is an inseparable part of any company.
In conclusion, we must change our mind about that how we can use internet in a beneficial manner; then, we see internet actually is a benefit instrument in “flow of life”. All of all, l think elaborated upon that internet drastically is profitable and effective instrument. In the end, I can say “where internet is, put other instrument to shame.”
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...is, put other instrument to shame.'
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, but, consequently, conversely, if, likewise, look, moreover, regarding, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 118.0 52.1666666667 226% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3578.0 1977.66487455 181% => OK
No of words: 709.0 407.700716846 174% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04654442877 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.16014088096 4.48103885553 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10699058898 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 350.0 212.727598566 165% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49365303244 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1161.9 618.680645161 188% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6003584229 165% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8773037482 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.235294118 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8529411765 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151645295856 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436032028214 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334671051196 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993921822269 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288649171704 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 169.0 86.8835125448 195% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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