Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sometimes it is better not to tell the truth.
Throughout the history human life, seeking truth and finding a true explanation for every issue is the specific identities of mankind, but truth shows the reality of everything that is not a pleasure for everyone. Therefore, people make an attempt to hide the truth or tell opposite side of truth in order that they think truth can harm their ordinary life. In my opinion, the advantages of telling the truth overweigh the disadvantages for the human being, and I explain and clarify my reasons hereunder.
First and foremost, hiding truth needs various methods to deviate people’s thought that other people believe this lying speech. In other words, someone tries to tell lie for a phenomenon so that he shows he does a right act, also he must cover lie with a new lie. As a result, after many sequential lies, eventually, all people are realizing about his truth which he is hiding for a long time, and he will be recognized as a deceptive person, then his value is missing in between people. Additionally, as psychological standpoint shows that the lying person’s brain after many times thinks all lies which he is saying are the truth, causing a disaster situation for the person because no one can believe his talk, and then he will be a distrustful person in his society.
Another second reason comes in mind is that many people think white lie helps them to save them from a precarious situation. Telling truth seems to make the sense of panic in the first moment, probably, this belief that truths can create some unpredictable problems is wrong because of the sensation of first time. Actually, if people frankly tell the actual story for any incident and have brave what they said, their self-confidence will be increased. Therefore, the people of this society are without any fearful sense in their conversation, and they are not worried about what they said. As medical standpoint shows that the people lying about some events are having a lot of anxiety and stress about that their lies are manifested, so that this stressful situation increases the considerable amount of harmful hormones in their body, due to their immune body system decreases. As a matter of the fact that these people are more receptive to many illnesses, but easily they can avoid these results by saying the truth.
All in all, in my opinion, a white lie is one of serious problems in a contemporary social society, because not only it causes the widespread effect of untruthful in society, but also its effects destroy the sense of self-esteem in each person.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 334, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...sequential lies, eventually, all people are realizing about his truth which he is hiding for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, frankly, if, second, so, then, therefore, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2127.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87844036697 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65633464628 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520642201835 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 656.1 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.0397730911 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.928571429 100.406767564 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1428571429 20.6045352989 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0978518361704 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425085750432 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401646442331 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0621635131435 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509754755429 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 11.7677419355 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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