Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sometimes it is better not to tell the truth. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Maintaining a healthy relationship nowadays in today's world is very difficult and in many aspects of our interactions with others that we need to worry about. In my opinion, it is better not to tell the truth to others. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, telling lies can sometimes motivate the people around us. Humans are more competitive In today's world and want to be the best at whatever the task they do. Whether they involved in work are in other things in personal, they feel motivated if they think it is possible to them that they can achieve impressive results. In these case, sometimes lying about their potential will encourage them to perform well. My own experience is a compelling example to this. last week, one of my friend visited my house and she asked me about how was her wedding party and I lied to her because I don't want to hurt her ego and even I don't want to spoil our relationship. I knew that it was not good at all but to make her happy I lied to her.
Secondly, being honesty all the time can lead us to high levels of risk, If we tell unpleasant truths, we may spend that day with all worrying about that. For instance, yesterday my sister came to me and asked about her dress. I was honest and said her that it is not looking good to her, but she didn't express any anger at my response but I could see that she was hurt by my words. As a result of this, I spend my whole day worrying about this. By this, my emotional state gently reduces my productivity that day, and I am still a bit nervous that my sister will hold a grudge against me. Had I simply said that her dress was looking wonderful I could have avoided all of these consequences.
In conclusion, I believe that there are times when it is better not to tell truth to others. This is because lies can motivate people to be happy, and because telling truth will sometimes lead to cause lots of consequences.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 79.0 43.0788530466 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33062330623 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41338222118 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520325203252 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5560269774 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7777777778 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 5.45110844103 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0902040040445 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039822042259 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526841491194 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0853442036364 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586998939735 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 58.1214874552 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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