Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words.
Do not use memorized examples.
Some people think professors have a great impact on students thinking and cognitive capacity. However, in my opinion I do not agree with this and think that friends have a higher impact on a student’s (students) life for the following three reasons.
First of all, friends spend a lot more time with students in life as compared to a professor. For example, when I was 8 years old my parents bought a new computer for me to learn new things. My school had a computer class but as the computers were new to the professor itself she found it difficult to understand let alone teach us. My friend was a computer genie and he taught me how to use paint and a lot of other stuffs. If he wouldn’t have taught me paint I wouldn't be such a good designer I am today as that was where my designing journey started. Thus, in my opinion I feel students are more prejudice while learning about new technology towards their friends rather than their teachers.
Secondly, friends being of the same age group gives a familarity to the students and they spend a lot of time together. For example, if the teacher is teaching something or trying to talk about some example the professor would find it difficult to connect to the students as they are of different age groups and they haven't have had enough time with the students to learn the likes or dislikes of the students. The students spend a lot more time with friends that includes in school and even outside schools socially teachers don't have that comfort. Therefore, it is difficult for teachers to leave an impression by their idealogies on students.
Finally, the students have a tendency to be competitive to their friends. For example, while playing some game or even while studying the student would prefer if he could do it with a friend rather than with a teacher. Friends have similar cognitive ability and similar or close strength that is able to be matched by the students as compared to the professor.
In conclusion, because friends gives a sense of familarity and spend a lot of time with the students, they can influence the students more than a professor can do
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, i feel, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64190981432 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57267356174 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461538461538 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 530.1 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6270484787 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.375 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5625 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 5.45110844103 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223302835461 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819003961699 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509876271415 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135274581359 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237494117564 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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