Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students do not respect their teachers as much as they did in the past.
Nowadays, the way of education is different from in the past. As a result, the behavior toward professors of students depends on various generations. While some students show the respective attitude against their teachers, some do not appreciate them. It is so controvertible for people to decide a specific result of young people’s behavior against their teacher. In my view, they do not respect their teachers as much as they did in the past. They can study by themselves with the internet without teachers, show the same attitude compared with their friends toward professors, and teachers cannot force students by strict insolence.
To begin with, studying with the internet by students diminishes respect toward their teachers. Nowadays, technology is more advance than in the past, so young people polish their skills through videos or websites from their computers. From this action, they gradually consider whether each school needs to have teachers. Therefore, they do not show respect for their professors. From these prospective, students do not honor their teachers as much as they did in the past.
Secondly, recent students make the same attention toward their teachers corresponded with their friends. Modern young people cannot split friendships between their teachers and friends. Consequently, it causes the same behavior against them. Take myself as an example, when I was a high school student, my classmates and teachers hang out each other every Sunday. We acquired the same relationship as friends between teachers and students. Besides, we asked our teacher private questions such as how to obtain a girlfriend, fix broken friendship with the specific classmate, much money our teacher earn from this job, and on.
Finally, alternative attitude from the past by teachers creates different behavior of their students. Some professors are not as strict as in the past time. For example, they do not force their students to finish the homework on the due day with violence. They also do not wake up their students with their hands. If they provide the same attitude toward their students in modern times, students request the dean of their schools and force their professors to quit jobs. Hence, they are not afraid of their teachers and show respect for them.
To sum up, young people do not respect their teachers compared with in the past. I surely believe that they focus on the study from a computer without teachers and make an attitude as much as their friends toward their teachers. Moreover, teachers show an alternative style of education against their students.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 147, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
... professors are not as strict as in the past time. For example, they do not force their s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, finally, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, such as, as a result, in my view, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2189.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22434367542 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61329431798 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434367541766 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 622.8 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0558510181 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1923076923 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1153846154 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.442871190795 0.236089414692 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16333176239 0.076458572812 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129136152664 0.0737576698707 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.321681404294 0.150856017488 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08103192912 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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