Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Success is defined by the amount of money someone earns.
Use examples and reasons to support your position.
Some people argues that the income of someone define his success. They cite comfortable and luxury life of this person to support their point. However, I strongly disagree with these people and believe that money earned isn’t a measure or scale of success but it could a way to it yet, not the only one. I will support my viewpoint with three reasons.
First of all, earned money doesn’t define someone’s value. For instance, someone whose income is not high, but he is very successful in his relationships, he is very social and everyone loves him. That is, someone with low income can still be called a successful person and his value in the eyes of others is very high.
Second of all, success is a broad expression that can be described by the achievements of a person. To illustrate, people call a student who keeps getting the highest marks straight from the elementary school to the college a successful student. Even though he still didn’t start working, but he achieved something that allow him to be called successful.
Lastly, successfulness still can be defined by money earned at some points. It is when someone earning a lot of money and step to the light spot because of that. For example, many high income people today used limited resources to reach a very high rank in the whole world, and that’s when people begin to relate them as successful persons.
To conclude, the issue whether amount of money earned define the success of someone is complex. Some have suggested that as a true statement because of the reflection of someone income on his status in many communities nowadays. Nevertheless, I still contend that money cannot measure the success of someone, and there are many different ways that anyone can go through to accomplish the success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'earns'.
Suggestion: earns
...rned at some points. It is when someone earning a lot of money and step to the light sp...
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Line 9, column 324, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...e the success of someone, and there are many different ways that anyone can go through to acco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, lastly, nevertheless, second, so, still, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 305.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87868852459 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59702349624 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547540983607 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5955628038 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266634732934 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101358409149 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722179750131 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156993786658 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067711959378 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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