SUCCESS is defined by the amount of money someone earns.
use examples and reasons to support your position.
Life is a long journey, therefore, success or failure cannot be solely defined by materialistic thing such as money. In my opinion, there are many more intangible parameters on which success can be measured and they are listed below.
Health is the most important thing in human's life, if one has tonnes of money but suffers from diabetes or high cholestrol in his daily life and as a result of which
one cannot enjoy the basic food items because money cannot buy him normal blood sugar levels. Moreover, Steve jobs, founder of the apple iphone, died of pancreatic cancer leaving behind all his wealth.
Apart from health, Happiness is the other crucial factor to define success in one's life. With Calmness and Happiness one achieve success in personal as well as in professional life. Small Country like Bhutan, Has given Happiness Index over Economic Index to world to measure success in their countries as most economically developed nations these days are suffering from the problems of depression and suicides, South Korea is the example of such nation.
Last but not the least, the moral and ethical values are other factors to determine success. Person with high ethical value is a gem to the society whereas rich person without moral value is a curse to a society. Last French ruler, Loui Phillip, rich but arrogant destroyed the whole nation, Therefore, led to riots and revolution in the nation.
In the end, I would like to conclude that not only money but person with high values make him successful in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, apart from, as to, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 43.0788530466 23% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 259.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93436293436 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41433483307 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6138996139 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3039735809 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.181818182 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 5.45110844103 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11923546093 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500183406777 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401501381456 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619824905499 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368147059252 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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