Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Practice makes perfect as they say. personally I believe that studying hard can result in a successful career path in future. I think so for two main reasons which I will explore later in this passage. First, by having a good knowledge in a field, you will meet a wide range of requirements for job opportunities; which makes you a proper candidate for your ideal job. For example when I was looking for job after my graduation, Although I did not know anyone in the company I was applying for job in it, my prior researches about a specific problem made me an excellent applicant and choice for the position I am currently taking. In addition, lacking required skills and using relations to get a job, can lead to get you fired; when your supervisors see you have trouble dealing with problems and finding solution for them. the company may would not trust the person who recommended you for the job next time as a consequence of the experience they had with you. For instance my uncle did recommend one of my friends for a position available in one his previous workplaces; unfortunately my friend failed to do his job properly and this lead to a mistrust from the company toward my uncle. Moreover, even if you fail to find job by just relying on your academic potentials, you have the ability and knowledge required to start your own business. As a compelling example, I can talk about my own experience. During my graduate studies, me and my friends were looking for job and we could not find any suitable position for ourselves, or we just got rejected for those that we applied for, so we started our business. we founded a startup in bioinformatics and made our own market. In conclusion, according to reasons argued above, I am positive that from being meticulous in studying, a bright future in working career may ensue.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Personally
Practice makes perfect as they say. personally I believe that studying hard can result...
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Suggestion: in the future
... can result in a successful career path in future. I think so for two main reasons which ...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good knowledge'.
Suggestion: good knowledge
...later in this passage. First, by having a good knowledge in a field, you will meet a wide range ...
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...problems and finding solution for them. the company may would not trust the person ...
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Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one hi', 'a hi', or simply 'his'?
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... my friends for a position available in one his previous workplaces; unfortunately my f...
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...pplied for, so we started our business. we founded a startup in bioinformatics and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6512345679 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75075158426 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570987654321 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4227201962 48.9658058833 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.923076923 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9230769231 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227752925553 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782472431091 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548006585054 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227752925553 0.150856017488 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.