Do you agree or disagree with the following statement For success in a future job the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Success has multiple ways that can lead to it. Hard working and having a wide network of people are two ways of a paramount importance to succeed in your career. For me, I disagree that each one of them can be useful alone or more important than the other one, they complete each other.

First of all, although having good relations with people is an important factor to thrive in work, this can't be acheived without working diligently. For example, if you aren't qualified enough for a certain job and keep learning, you can't succeed in it. It's also known that you can't get good relations unless you are a successful and useful persons to others. This is because relations are "give and take".

Second, hard working is essential for success as you can't reach your targets in life such as having a lot of money if you don't do your best in work to achieve them. There is a quote saying "no pain, no gain". We have to make the best use of our qualifications to succeed. From my personal experience, I used to aim for an honored position in my career as a pharmacist. I decided to put this objective in front of my eyes and started to study hard in the pharmacy school from the first year, I learned many useful skills like computer and communication skills as well as volunteering in research during the college years. After graduation, all what I gave before I earn it now as I'm working as a professor of pharmaceutical sciences in cairo university in Egypt.

Lastly, communication with people in the same field may help you to overcome the obstacles in career and facilitate many things for you. I always attend the scientific conferences in the pharmaceutics field and I have very good relations with professors and honored persons who help me alot with their wide expertise in different facets like administration or learning process. They also facilitate getting the fund for my researches at the university.

In the summary, both hard working and wide relations are of significant importatnce to success.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...mportant factor to thrive in work, this cant be acheived without working diligently....
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...working diligently. For example, if you arent qualified enough for a certain job and ...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...or a certain job and keep learning, you cant succeed in it. Its also known that you ...
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... succeed in it. Its also known that you cant get good relations unless you are a suc...
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...working is essential for success as you cant reach your targets in life such as havi...
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...for my researches at the university. In the summary, both hard working and wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, lastly, may, second, so, well, for example, such as, as well as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79545454545 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81231059968 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559659090909 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4870528526 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2941176471 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7058823529 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273289423779 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793691908283 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499367162331 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146703486269 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306204504289 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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