Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school.
work is something we perform to earn for our living. To perform well in our career, we must be well versed with the knowledge that is required for us. I partially disagree with the statement that relating to the people and ability to get communicated properly is not only the required thing but also the specified knowledge is required in the path we choose for our future success.
To begin, when we want to achieve a good job, we need to study the respective subject properly and in varied ways to get most of the subject from it. Sometimes, we need to study hard and focus more in varied ways which will differentiate us from other people. For example, when we applied for a job as a data analyst and the requirement is a BI software. most of the students may learn it because as it may be part of curriculum. but, when we study hard and learn advances of it, we will be recognized compared to others and probability of securing a job is high.
Further, we also need to know the ways we need to talk to people. this is essential because in most of the organizations all the employees work as a team. If we are unable to relate to people, we may not be given work to our level and may not be recognized properly. For example, when there is an appraisal time, when we are not able to tell the team the work done by me, then we may loose the promotion that is going to be offered due to lack of communication.
but, when we have communication skills and not talent, we will definitely not succeed in our career. Even though we have great skills to talk to people, we can't manage with it for a longer time. For example, when our hierarchy asks about our work, we may use our speaking skills to manipulate, but he will ultimately know in future that the work is not yet finished. this is because we do not have sufficient knowledge for the task to be done for our job.this may also lead to decline of our career.
In my conclusion, I state that studying hard in school is important from which we gain subject which is a key factor for our career. but, we also require skills to relate well to people which will also be one of the factors for growth in our career.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31540342298 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48800543198 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.425427872861 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 559.8 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1216402211 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0555555556 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7222222222 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61111111111 5.45110844103 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168611366 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067579144091 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612790930051 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116452152001 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674921768656 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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