Without a shadow of a doubt, our life is fulfilled with unavoidable challenges to overcome, and we have to make a plethora of arduous decisions throughout our lives. While some people prefer to take their time when they make decisions, others, however, stand on the other side of the continuum, asserting that spending a tremendous amount of time on a decision is not a good characteristic. As for my opinion, I subscribe to the prior idea. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into two of my prominent reasons for advocating this viewpoint.
First and foremost, we need to consider our problem and solution from different perspectives, if we want to make the best decision, and there is no denying that this can be significantly time-consuming. We should evaluate each available solution's repercussions. Our decision might have a deleterious repercussion that at first glance does not look apparent. Moreover, as time goes on, we can come up with novel and ingenious decisions that are notably better than the ones we already had. Therefore, if we decide carelessly, we might neglect a plethora of options and ruin our life. As a result, individuals who take their time and probe every possible option, are more likely to achieve prosperity in their life. An example can drive this notion home. A well-known scientist named Tesla was trying to come up with the best way to transport electricity. At first, everyone thought that DC voltage is the most efficient way. But Tesla did not rush and spent a considerable amount of time in his laboratory. Finally, he came up with the conclusion that AC voltage has less energy waste, and he was right. His discovery saved humanity from wasting energy, and he was able to come up with this decision just because he did not make his decision as soon as possible and considered every aspect of the problem.
Furthermore, another equally compelling reason for corroborating my stance lies in the fact that when a person is patient enough to not make decisions right away, it means that he is more capable of controlling himself and his situation. In this hectic modern era, when people want to make crucial decisions, they become significantly stressed, consequently, they can not evaluate all eventuality. It's crystal clear that individuals need to learn how to control themselves in order to lead a gratifying life. In fact, people who have well-developed self-control are more likely to be employed and get a satisfactory job, because it is the most sought-after characteristic among employers.
To put it all in a nutshell, having all the aforementioned reasons into account, I strongly believe that taking a lot of time to make decisions is a positive feature, on the ground that it enables people to make better decisions. It also indicates that they can control severe situations and alleviate their stress and anxiety.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, as for, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2404.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 479.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01878914405 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00901492004 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538622129436 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 769.5 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4922906319 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.272727273 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7727272727 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31818181818 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197401008804 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516786076149 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453581907241 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130902553649 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368396457617 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 86.8835125448 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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