Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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Doubtlessly, teachers play a critical role in the development of a person and with the progression of the society, the importance of education has been acknowledged more, expressed in people seeker for finer education and seeking for place in more elite schools. I believe the teachers are treated with more respect by the modern society compared with the past, as they are the increasingly important and they are the enabler of the whole education process.
To begin with, the present world value knowledge more, because the advent of newer technology. this increases in demand for better education and also increases the demand for teachers. we are starting to understand the importance of knowledge, and understanding how possessing knowledge can give us a huge advantage over our peers in applying for jobs. Without the help of an educator, its getting harder to obtain knowledge especially with more specialized information that will be accessed in university. teachers devote their time assisting us students to complete projects, pass qualification test. As we appreciate what they did for us more, we will respect them more. On the contrary, in past decades, where the average education is lower, knowledge is not so urgently needed, so the respect of teachers is lower in that time.
Furthermore, there are high standards for teachers now, so all those who can become a teacher are valuable resource to the society. teachers now can better convey their thoughts with students, can better communicate with student, a characteristic that is important for teachers to build relationships with students that contain mutual respect. teachers nowadays behave more like a friend to the students, gaining respect by respect the students. it might seem that in older days, students obey they teachers firmly, that some people interpret it as respect. No, that form of relationship is based on fear of the humiliation or physical punishment that might be resulted in if student do not comply with whatever their teachers say, not trust and respect. To extend from this, teachers are generally more knowledgable, and they conquer a student's mind by their friendliness and scholarship.
To sum up, I believe teachers are more respected in the modern world as they are like the "candles that guide us through the night." While being our teachers, they are also our friend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, while, on the contrary, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2002.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21354166667 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90227102169 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0432512436 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.125 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177001101135 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676792707643 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443943027141 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115368479957 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321629193095 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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