Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A teacher's ability to relate well with students is more important than excellent knowledge of the subject being taught. Use specific reasons and support your answers with examples

It is obvious that teacher plays very crucial role on students as students learn more things from things. While most of the people think that teachers must be very knowledgeable of the subject being taught, I believe a teacher's ability to relate well with students is more important because of the reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
to start with, it is important to relate well with students. We have lots of great teacher that have broad knowledge about anything but he or she cannot teach them well to students. The way teachers teach students is very important than having a broad information. Teachers must know how to encourage and not to disappoint students. Teachers should help the students in the way that students can catch the lesson very well. Also, it is very important for a teacher to have a great dominance on students; For example, when I was at school, my teacher knows almost about anything and he was very knowledgeable, but he was not able to control the class, so the students make noise and he was not able to teach well. due to this reason, I think it is important for a teacher to relate well with students.
Secondly, it is very important to a teacher to make the lesson very interesting for the students. As we know all school subjects are very boring for a lot of students. However, it is the responsibility of a teacher to make studies interesting. It is very important for a teacher to uses different techniques to learn for the students.
finally, It is fundamental to for teachers to relate with the students because teacher can know more about the students, and he or she will know the weakness and the strength of the students; as a result, the teacher can deal with the student very well.
To sum up, it is very important for a teacher to have the ability to relate with the students well because of the reasons I mentioned above.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, i think, as a result, to start with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60830860534 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62143626262 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.385756676558 0.524837075471 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.8849698399 48.9658058833 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.533333333 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29984181772 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145137015514 0.076458572812 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117936560961 0.0737576698707 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22645899209 0.150856017488 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896905642672 0.0645574589148 139% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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