Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Educational system is one of the crucial part in training students for future. Children spend a lot of their life time in school dealing with teachers which this interaction could have a positive or negative effect on student’s future. Some people believe that teachers should aware students from their own point of view in various subjects, while some others hold an opposite opinion. In my view, presenting teacher's attitude in class could have beneficial impact on students for two remarkable reasons.
The main reason is that teachers training a successful person by sharing their believes with pupils. Children have their own hero who is perfect in each aspect for them to imitate its behavior. In educational world teachers are the student’s role model that have a strong impact on them. Therefore, teachers who are well-educated are the best choice to advise students by sharing their opinion with them and guide them through right direction which provide them with success in future. For example, when I was in high school, I had no idea about the social and political situation in our society as I always deal with my lessons and had no chance to know about these matters. As a result, I had a difficulty in choosing my field for university which could determine my future prosperity. However, when I consulted with my teachers, he provided me by diverse information giving me a good familiarity with our country condition and career requirements. Undoubtly, my teacher's view came me out of blindness and help me to opt the right field which turned me to a successful lawyer now.
Second, teachers, who indicate their social opinion, improve student's ability to make better decisions. Students spend plenty of their time with friends and wouldn't include a lot with people who are informed from political or social news in society. Teachers as one of a well- informed person in kid's life could involve kids to relate country's total circumstance. By this mean, children would get a great amount of useful experience that helps them in making better decisions. For instance, statistics showed a direct relationship between quality of kid's decisions and be aware of society situation. Researchers investigated two groups of children, one who know their teacher's social and political attitude and the other without this consciousness in order to determine quality of their decisions. Surprisingly, students, who were known their teachers point of view, making better decisions due to have more knowledge and also valid information. As you can see, teachers have a significant role in children training by presenting their own view about different issues.
In conclusion, teachers should discuss about their opinion in various aspects with students. Not only do teachers guarantee children’s success, but they also enhance kid's ability to make better decisions. I think each student should have this chance to be known its teacher point of view.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2503.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 479.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2254697286 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80440986236 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494780793319 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 758.7 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3248134246 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.826086957 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8260869565 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82608695652 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264545138224 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085407877173 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494041458563 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185837990896 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410401116401 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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