Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Telephone has a greater influence on people’s lives than television has.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The telephone has a greater influence on people’s lives than television has.
In the modern’s world, with the advancement in technology, people have access to various kinds of useful devices such as the telephone and television. While all of these devices have been changed people’s lives in many aspects, the question that arises in this regard is which one has a greater influence on our lives. Although some people are inclined towards the idea that the telephone has more influence on our lives than television, I am of the opinion that the influence of television on people’s lives is more considerable in comparison to the telephone. In the following paragraph, I will delve into the most conspicuous reasons and examples justifying my point of view.
The first significant reason coming to my mind is that television programs broaden our horizons on thousands of subjects that are beneficial for the betterment of our lives. Nowadays, different television channels allocate a great part of their programs to educations ones that consisted of different subjects, from science, economics to psychology subjects. Through the science programs, people learn about the questions that always occupied their minds, for instance, learn about how natural phenomenon creates which help them avoid being superstitious. Economic programs expand their knowledge of how to manage their salary and increase their income. Through the psychological program, they would learn how to be healthy both physically and mentally.
The second noteworthy reason is that television programs assist us to be aware of what is happening around the world. Since in today’s world, there is a close relationship between our lives with others. Some events in another town or country might have positive or negative influences on our lives. Therefore, television has an influential role in the awareness of people. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. Since I have invested a great amount of money in the stock market, following news help me to avoid losing money as many factors including the unemployment rate, a war, the value of the foreign currency can have an effect on my shares. Another example is when the coronavirus has spread all over the, if the television programs had not provided reliable information about how to prevent and control this disease, the rate of death would have been enormous.
From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that television has made a great impact on people’s lives not only through broadening our visions on various concepts and topics but also awaking us what is going on around us which may considerably affect our lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2317.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 442.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24208144796 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83903839751 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533936651584 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 717.3 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7763041224 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.947368421 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2631578947 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.10526315789 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321015652224 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110190680939 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16274952713 0.0737576698707 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284893629301 0.150856017488 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.338616022658 0.0645574589148 525% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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