Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television, newspapers, magazines and other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people such as public figures and celebrities. Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.
The news media is a competitive arena, where each news agency is trying to grab more eyeballs by broadcasting interesting news. In my personal opinion, Television, newspaper. magazine and other media puts a lot
of importance in covering the personal lives and public figures in their news channel. This essay will explore the reasons for aforementioned opinion.
First of all, a majority of news that is being sold, nowadays, are with the picture of the celebrity on their cover. The personal lives of the celebrities are the major focus in these news outlet.
The celebrity are interviews about their personal lives along with pictures of their personal events. For instance, the details of wedding events of Priyanka Chopra and Nick Jonas were regularly followed up by all news agencies. As a result of this,
the public got a closer view on the lives of the two celebrities.
Secondly, the celebrities are also followed by the paparazzi all around the world. They are being judged for their attire, makeup and their behavior around the public. The celebrities are even being followed when they go out to eat in the restaurants. Recently, a news article of two celebrities dating were published as they were both seen
exiting restaurants together. The personal lives of celebrities are always under the scrutiny on news media.
Thirdly, the advent of social media has revealed a great variety of information regarding the personal lives of celebrities. The news media easily feeds off the information from the social media account of celebrities and discuss it in an expansive manner on their outlet. The missing of wedding ring on a picture on a social media account causes speculations to arise whether the celebrity is getting divorced. For example, divorce of Miley Cyrus was predicted by the news media and talked at length even before the singer announced her separation from her husband.
The essay shows how the news media, in order to achieve more followers, publishes and broadcasts the personal lives and event of celebrities on their news outlet. Indubitably, the news media puts too much importance to personal lives of public figures.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: opinion
...by broadcasting interesting news. In my personal opinion, Television, newspaper. magazine and ot...
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Suggestion: Magazine
...ersonal opinion, Television, newspaper. magazine and other media puts a lot of importan...
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...he reasons for aforementioned opinion. First of all, a majority of news that is...
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Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
... the celebrities are the major focus in these news outlet. The celebrity are interviews a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...their personal events. For instance, the details of wedding events of Priyanka Ch...
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... all news agencies. As a result of this, the public got a closer view on the live...
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Message: Consider replacing "in an expansive manner" with adverb for "expansive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...a account of celebrities and discuss it in an expansive manner on their outlet. The missing of wedding...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13276836158 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73177279275 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497175141243 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.9 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 15.0 3.08781362007 486% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8974108948 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.85 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.53405017921 198% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177387540409 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700538906077 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577492429476 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976800942304 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334781917846 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.