Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Research of a topic requires extensive reading and going through of resources available to us. In my opinion, it is better to use the internet for the purpose of research. I feel this for various reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, use of internet which is readily available to us is very convenient. Internet services are easily accessible and it is available at all hours. Internet can be accessed from home or at a cyber cafe near us. Research requires lots of hours of hard work of going through of journals and articles and the convenience of internet at all hours and its easy availability makes research an easier process. My personal example is a cogent example of this. I had been a student of middle school when the project on solar systems were given to me by my geography teacher as a midterm project. I was supposed to get books and articles from the library for the completion of the project. But I had a hairline fracture which made me bedridden and internet acted as a savior for me. With the help of materials available on internet, I could complete the project and submit it within the scheduled time. As a result, the ease of presence of internet helps in the process of research.
Secondly, resources available in internet are varied and up-to-date. The resources are multitudinous from articles, journals to videos and podcasts. The articles and journals available over the internet are latest and up-to-date. Also, videos and podcasts available over the internet can be very helpful in the process of research. For example, research of a topic like global warming made by my students was extensive as they could access latest news reports and videos available over the news portals. The project contained latest data and recordings of temperature all over the world as it was available over the internet. Accordingly, the project had up-to date information and was detailed.
In conclusion, it is better to do research using the internet. This is because of the ease of access of internet and the extensive materials available on the internet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...and journals available over the internet are latest and up-to-date. Also, videos ...
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...my students was extensive as they could access latest news reports and videos available over ...
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...able over the news portals. The project contained latest data and recordings of temperature all ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91899441341 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76508237388 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.449720670391 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 564.3 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2214470474 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0454545455 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86363636364 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187254857294 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072351109854 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911282193123 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162549129709 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871800765732 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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