These days, people enjoy a lot of time away from their work and school obligations. Many people use this time to visit new places and learn about them. What do you think is the best way to learn about a place you are visiting for the first time?
Going to a museum
Joining a guided tour of popular attractions
Visiting a popular shopping area
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Trip to new places is a way people unwind themselves from their busy schedules. In my opinion, taking a guided tour of the popular attractions of a city is the best way to know about a new place. I feel this way for two reasons which I will elaborate on this following essay.
To begin with, a guided tour of famous attractions of the city will provide knowledge of the different tourist spots of the city. The history of the city will be evident from these popular attractions and also the guide can provide information regarding how these attractions came into place and the historical importance of these attractions will further reveal more facets of the city. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. I had been a student of middle school when I had visited the city of Agra. The popular attractions of this city are the historical monuments. The guided tour that we took gave us a lot of information regarding the history of the city.
Secondly, popular attractions do not only provide knowledge of the tourist spots but also help us to know about the culture of the city. As these attractions are visited by people all over the city, we get a first hand experience of the culture of the city by observing these people. The importance of these attractions to the people in the city in current days also unveil their preference and the role of these attractions in their life. As a result, the culture of the city becomes more evident to the tourists through these attractions. For instance, when I visited my brother who lives in the city of Hyderabad last year, we took a guided tour of the famous Charminar. Charminar is a historical monument with lots of shops around it and it is always bustling with people. It revealed to us how the people of the city loves to visit Charminar because of the food and the jewelry that is sold nearby. We also noticed how the people who visited Charminar mostly wore necklace of pearls, hence we deduced pearl is popular form of jewelry here.
In conclusion, the best way to learn about a place is to take a tour of popular attraction with the help of a guide. This is because it provides information regarding the different tourist spots and it also reveals the culture of the city.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63092269327 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62031284207 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.401496259352 0.524837075471 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4420045144 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7368421053 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1052631579 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36842105263 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193121280084 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710399116512 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552827354036 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147824298098 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058251968954 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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