People have a lot of opinions about the value of advanced education. Which do you think is the most important reason to attend college or university? Use reasons and examples to support your answer.
new experiences
career preparation
increased knowledge
Advanced education is becoming crucial for today's world as it holds a lot of importance for everyone. In my opinion, it is significant as it prepares us for our chosen career. I feel this for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, advanced education provides the students a platform to become more confident which help them to shape their career. Through advanced education courses, the students can share their ideas and views which help them grow as a person and become more self-assured in front of people. Thus, when they step into their career, they do not hesitate to share their thoughts and notions and this can propel them forward into their career. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. When I had started my graduate course in education with the hopes of becoming a teacher, I was hesitant of public speaking. But, gradually with the help of the course, I became more confident and was able to get a job the month I passed the course. As a result of this course, I became a successful teacher.
Secondly, advanced education also instills in us a work discipline that is required for career. The schedule of exams and deadlines of assignments prepare us for a future of strong work ethics. The students need to follow certain sets of rules and regulations and also timelines which ultimately benefit them in the career as they are accustomed to work pressure before they step into their career. For instance, my brother while studying his engineering course had a hard time keeping up with assignments and also studying for semester-end exams. But the moment he started working as a software engineer in a private company, he realized how much the course has helped him to get familiarized with work pressure.
In conclusion, advanced education helps student to prepare for their career. This is because it makes the student more confident and also prepare for the hard work that is required in a work life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to career'
Suggestion: to career
...ficant as it prepares us for our chosen career. I feel this for two reasons which I wi...
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Line 9, column 336, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[4]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'accustomed to working'.
Suggestion: accustomed to working
... benefit them in the career as they are accustomed to work pressure before they step into their ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87278106509 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65133165395 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491124260355 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6531450283 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8823529412 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8823529412 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94117647059 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0599187468682 0.236089414692 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.025504473107 0.076458572812 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285316883553 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.045931513374 0.150856017488 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387455423392 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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