When you face difficult problems in life, what do you feel is the best way to solve them?
asking someone with more experience for advice about the problem
finding information about the problem using the Internet
taking a long time to think about the problem
Life has its owns ups and downs: ups are marked by moments of joy and happiness whereas the problems constitute the down and difficult times in life. In my opinion, thinking about the problem for a long time is the best way to disentangle them. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, thinking about a problem with concentration will result in understanding the problem completely. Every problem has its unique situation. These situations make it important to study the problem on its own and does not always necessitate comparison with any other problem. In order to find a solution to a problem, it is absolutely crucial to figure out the problem and this is only possible by taking a long time to concentrate our thoughts on the difficulties of the problem. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. I had been a student in middle school when I could not find my student id. I needed the student id for the exam and without the presence of student id I would not have been allowed to sit or the exam. I started to delve deeply into the problem and realized the only solution to the problem is if I can produce another document as identification paper and hence, grabbed my library card from my file. As a result, I was able to sit for the exam, and also apply for a new student id.
Secondly, taking time to investigate the problem may result in solutions that were never thought before and hence, enhance the problem-solving skills of a person. It is very easy to grab hold of another person or resources like internet to solve problems. But solving problems on your own may provide with unique thought processes and give solutions that could not have been suggested by any person. This ability to analyse a problem will make the person a better problem solver on future problems. For instance, my brother when started the course on engineering always searched internet for any problem he faced while working on the laptop. But this does not necessarily result in better understanding of the working of the laptop. Hence, later he started studying the laptop and its functions and the short keys and how any programming can be done more efficiently on his own by taking time to understand the problems he faced and as a result, he figured out lots of solutions that were not suggested over the internet.
In conclusion, the best way to figure out a problem is to take a long time to dig deeply into the problem. This is because every problem is unique and also understanding the problem on your own may result in solution that were not mentioned by any other source.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2184.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 469.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65671641791 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6696918131 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445628997868 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 699.3 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8803792046 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.80952380952 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341232335232 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119843515804 0.076458572812 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974392457177 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244079310023 0.150856017488 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529712637674 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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