Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? There is nothing that young people can teach older people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.
The world is changing at an ever increasing pace.In order to be a part of this fast changing world,we need to learn new things in every stage of our life.In my opinion,I believe there are a few things that young people can teach older people.I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, older people can learn about the modern means of communications from the younger generation.The internet has revolutionized our lives and made it possible for communicating with people living in any part of the world instantly.With the help of the younger generation, older people too can use the internet and enjoy its benefits. My own experience demonstrates convincing example of this.I taught my grandfather, how to use the internet and today,he can talk with his friends and our relatives who live in far off places.Older people can gain essential knowledge from the younger generation which will help them to derive the benefits of modern means of communications like the internet.
Furthermore,we live in an era of technology. Everything in our lives starting from ours cars, our houses and even public places are equipped with modern technology. Since belonging to a different generation, the older people might face problems while using or familiarizing themselves with these electronic devices of the current generation.The younger people can teach and give necessary information to the older generation regarding these modern equipments. For instance,my grandfather belonging to a different generation had a tough time using his plasma T.V.I had to instruct him the procedure for using the T.V and provide him with all the necessary knowledge required for operating it. It is evident that older people can learn necessary information from the younger people regarding the use of modern equipments and devices.
In conclusion,I strongly believe that younger people can teach quite a few things to older people.This is because older people can learn to use the internet from the younger generation and also they can learn to derive benefits from modern technology through the young people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... is changing at an ever increasing pace.In order to be a part of this fast changin...
^^
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
...to be a part of this fast changing world,we need to learn new things in every stage...
^^^
Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...n new things in every stage of our life.In my opinion,I believe there are a few th...
^^
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...in every stage of our life.In my opinion,I believe there are a few things that you...
^^
Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...hat young people can teach older people.I feel this way for two reasons, which I ...
^
Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...munications from the younger generation.The internet has revolutionized our lives a...
^^^
Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: With
...ving in any part of the world instantly.With the help of the younger generation, old...
^^^^
Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...demonstrates convincing example of this.I taught my grandfather, how to use the i...
^
Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , he
...ather, how to use the internet and today,he can talk with his friends and our relat...
^^^
Line 3, column 537, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Older
...ur relatives who live in far off places.Older people can gain essential knowledge fro...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
...ations like the internet. Furthermore,we live in an era of technology. Everythin...
^^^
Line 5, column 342, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ronic devices of the current generation.The younger people can teach and give neces...
^^^
Line 5, column 473, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , my
...ng these modern equipments. For instance,my grandfather belonging to a different ge...
^^^
Line 5, column 563, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...n had a tough time using his plasma T.V.I had to instruct him the procedure for u...
^
Line 5, column 615, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: V
...truct him the procedure for using the T.V and provide him with all the necessary ...
^
Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...equipments and devices. In conclusion,I strongly believe that younger people ca...
^^
Line 7, column 99, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...each quite a few things to older people.This is because older people can learn to us...
^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n technology through the young people.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'furthermore', 'if', 'regarding', 'so', 'while', 'for instance', 'i feel', 'in conclusion', 'in my opinion', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237837837838 0.229887763892 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.159459459459 0.158761421928 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.116216216216 0.0866891130778 134% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0216216216216 0.046263068375 47% => More adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0702702702703 0.0685040099705 103% => OK
Prepositions: 0.124324324324 0.118717715034 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0459459459459 0.0351676179071 131% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.95744107016 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0324324324324 0.0309702414327 105% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.1 0.0887237588012 113% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0351351351351 0.0209618222197 168% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0108108108108 0.0139019557991 78% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2308.0 2387.08602151 97% => OK
No of words: 343.0 408.028673835 84% => OK
Chars per words: 6.72886297376 5.86048508987 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.36443148688 0.338922669872 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.276967930029 0.251872472559 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.215743440233 0.174417080927 124% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.157434402332 0.112833075102 140% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95744107016 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492711370262 0.524397521467 94% => OK
Word variations: 51.0089624616 59.2087087015 86% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6684587814 44% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 38.1111111111 20.5533526081 185% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 123.247818201 48.84282405 252% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 256.444444444 120.699889404 212% => Too many chars per sentence.
Words per sentence: 38.1111111111 20.5533526081 185% => Too many words per sentence.
Discourse Markers: 1.22222222222 0.644075263715 190% => Too many Discourse Markers.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.54480286738 325% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 65.807904114 45.7405998639 144% => OK
Elegance: 1.62365591398 1.45489161554 112% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347957868111 0.300154397459 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.230034097329 0.103427244359 222% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.155981467066 0.0752933317313 207% => Ideas in sentences are changed often
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.683632026769 0.497263757937 137% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.284092051976 0.151897553556 187% => Sentences are changing often in a paragraphs.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184833681922 0.114077575197 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109749815609 0.0781384742642 140% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.447785898174 0.336927656856 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.109587326758 0.067059652881 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266121533992 0.210909579961 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519882995019 0.0618886996521 84% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8870967742 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 8.42114695341 36% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 13.6433691756 51% => OK
--------------------------
Don't put a space before punctuation marks.
Always put a space after punctuation marks. Essay e-rater is sensitive. Most of the errors because of the wrong white spaces.
Rates: 70 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 21 Out of 30