Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Today’s media (TV and online news sites, for example) offer a lot of information on many topics, but people do not use this information to really learn something thoroughly and in depth. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
some people in the world believes that most of the tv channels and media departments are talks about only politics and economy always. Thus I totally disagree with those people, in my opinion there are so many media houses and tv channels who share lots of important information in every aspects of life but there are people who try to avoid this information all time. I will illustrate this topic in subsequent paragraphs.
First, many news sources offer lots of information everyday at their fixed time in a day, at that time they telecast information on new topic and describe their status in past present and future. For example, the history tv channel which telecast new episode on every day on life history. In which they tells us about a particular event happened in the past and their importance. Unfortunately, most people don’t watch this channel on tv, they prefer to watch a music program or an action movie. they always procrastinate when its time to watch something knowledgeable. As a result they started criticising tv channels for not showing informative content.
Second, ther are many people who argue that they couldn’t get enough time to watch tv because of their work schedule. I want to tell those people that there are so many social media channels also available on internet with help of this you can stay updated. For instance, the social media channel of BBC, CNN, and FOX news on social media and they divided this channels in subdivisions like one for international news, one for stock market and one for business etc. Now some people going to argue that it would be time consuming. well, no, the videos they upload on there social media channels are barely 4 to 5 minutes long so anyone can watch this by saving little of their timer activities.
In conclusion, as I mentioned people do not watch informative tv channels because of their habit as well as they they always start gave excuses of their work when we ask them about watching informative content. However, I believe that there is lot of information available on many topics on one click.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82729805014 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59887832999 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518105849582 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2302000721 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.3125 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4375 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242880443113 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865677689456 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535338704225 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169058079977 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263194621435 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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