tpo11- Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others
think access to much information creates problems.
Some people in the world think that too much information from the internet makes trouble people. However, it is my firm belief that the internet provides a lot of valuable information as well as opportunities to people. I have three reasons which support these ideas and I will develop these ideas in subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, more information from the internet is useful because it gives people a broader concept about a particular subject that they want. For example, if a college wants information about the theory of evolution so he could get that in detail from the internet instead of the short from a book. I remember when the internet was not introduced people need to buy different books for little information and later those books were not useful for anyone.
Secondly, a lot of information from the internet is precious because it gives people extra information to start research so people do not need to dig deep for extra information which saves their time. For instance when a student who runs out of time for a school project, basically goes to the internet and gets the information that he wants on the first attempt so he writes it down immediately after his first attempt. As a result lot of information in the very first attempt will save people time and money also.
For last but not least, extra information on the internet would help when someone tries to know about a particular topic that he might not be familiar with it. like, people who want to masterate in a specific subject in a very short time then can prefer the internet which helps them as quickly as they want. In the time before the internet was not in use people used to get their education for a long time. but, now people can learn anything in the short time period
To conclude there is a complex view on this subject to express that still in light of the reasons mentioned, I strongly believe that a lot of information provided by information is valuable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68497109827 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56029727226 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488439306358 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.3799068273 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.692307692 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6153846154 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 5.45110844103 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349182836138 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149521903413 0.076458572812 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923223242116 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209755745699 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501033473475 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.