Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
To truly enjoy a vacation, people should leave their mobile phone at home.
It is debatable whether people should leave their mobile phone at home to truly enjoy a vacation. This issue can be approached from different angles due to its complexity. After deeply deleborating, I contend that people should bring their mobile phone to totally enjoy a vacation.
One reason people should bring their cell phone during a vacation is that this is conducive to their trip. As the advance of technology, there are many functions in mobile phones that can help their vacation go smoothly. For example, because of the map in the mobile phones, humans can enjoy their trip without being afraid to lose. Also, people can search some spectacular landmarks and sceneries, delicious foods and drinks whenever they want on the trip. This will enrich their vacation a lot. Admittedly, some people might argue that they can find their way, find the destinations they like before starting off and leave phones at home. However, in order to do this they need to bring plentiful notes which increase the weight of their package and they cannot enjoy their trip with heavy burdensome.
Another reason that taking vacation with a mobile phone is that it helps people deal with emergencies. People could meet some troubles, such as traffic accidents, falling down from the way when they climb mountains. When these kinds of things happen, no matter how relaxed they are before, they need a cell phone to ask for help to deal with the problem immediately. But if they don't have cell phones, then they may not have any ability to handle these in a place they are not familiar with. My experience is a good example to explain this idea. Five years ago, My family had a trip to Japan. We rent a car and drove to a high mountain. When we looked the scenery relaxedly, suddenly, the tide of our car broken. We didn't know what to do because we didn't bring our mobile phones to avoid disturbance by them. As a result, the only thing we could do was walk. After five hours walking, finally could we find a house and ask for help. It was a terrifying experience. Since that, I believe people need cell phone to make sure they can truly relaxed in a vacation.
Moreover, there are other kinds of emergencies we need to address by cell phone during a vacation. Sometimes, accidents may not directly happen on a vacation. Instead, they happen from distance. People need to know these in time and solve them or they will not enjoy their trip anymore. For example, a person thought that he had finished his project and took a vacation. During his trip, his boss found a big mistake but she couldn't find the man to solve it before they published this project because he didn't bring his cell phone. The boss was so angry that she fired the man. After this, the man couldn't enjoy his trip anymore.
Admittedly, some people might argue that mobile phones interfere with our vacation, so people should not take it during their vacation. However, even though there are some advantages of leaving mobile phones, there are more drawbacks. With the reasons I mentioned above, I believe only if people bring their cell phone, truly can they enjoy a vacation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 26.0 9.8082437276 265% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 82.0 43.0788530466 190% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2599.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 549.0 407.700716846 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73406193078 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84053189512 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34268582628 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457194899818 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 801.9 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6003584229 165% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6733924837 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4411764706 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1470588235 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85294117647 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309170751038 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877711827501 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106813127776 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22750220979 0.150856017488 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112312145245 0.0645574589148 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.