Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people claim that the uses of cars will decrease in 20 years because of reducing environment pollution. However, in my opinion, I believe that there will increase the number of cars for three reasons.
First of all, the use of cars will increase in near future because of increasing population. For example, People getting married now, have children who will teenager in 20 years. They have to move out. So they will need cars. If they don't have cars, the have to wait for others car or have to delay their work. The world will be more busier than today, people will have to be more punctual. They would prefer to cars simply be in time.
Second of all, because of booming technology, there will be more attractive cars which will faster and safer. For instance, before 20 years ago, cars was not as fast as today. Also, cars become more attractive with increasing speed. Now-a-days electric cars have become more popular to the people who are very wary about the environment. Moreover, cars have become more comfortable and artificial intelligence makes it easy to drive safely. For example, with GPS one can go anywhere without being lost.
Finally, in twenty years there will be more cars in use because people will be more independent. For instance, I will not like to wait 30 minutes to a public bus to come at bus station rather, I will prefer to go my work with my cars within thirty minutes. People need the freedom to go wherever the want. But, The public transport will not take them to all places they want to visit. With a car I have the freedom to go my university. I can visit may relatives and friends at any time. I also have the freedom to travel on the weekends. In future people will value freedom more and they will like be more independent. Cars gives the freedom to go anywhere at any time. So, the uses of cars will increase in future.
In conclusion, while it may seem to decrease in cars in twenty years, The above three reasons clearly show that the number of cars in use will increase undoubtedly within twenty years.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ve out. So they will need cars. If they dont have cars, the have to wait for others ...
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Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'busier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: busier
... to delay their work. The world will be more busier than today, people will have to be more...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ime. So, the uses of cars will increase in future. In conclusion, while it may seem t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 9.8082437276 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58807588076 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35559197165 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455284552846 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8079937292 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.1153846154 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1923076923 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24138287973 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810634495182 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687906178326 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163578998024 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185000912949 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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