Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In twenty years from now, many things will be changed as a part of normal development of mankind in all aspects of life. Cars, for instance, will be affected in a way to coop with the new era. For me, I agree with that statement as I think that cars will not be used too much comparable to what happens today and I will discuss my reasons for that support in this essay.
Firstly, nowadays there are some signs that fuel stores will pale soon in the near future and there will not be enough fuel for starting cars and other machines that depend on it. Many epidemiological studies made in different places all over the world support that claim. For example, in the middle east region, the petrol sources are drying now and the levels are decreasing significantly each year.
Secondly, with the technological development, we expect that other means of transportation will be more available for public than cars like ultrasonic planes, flying suits that allow people to travel and go to their work rapidly and etc..
Thirdly, with the enlarging problems of crowdedness and environmental pollution, the usage of cars will be reduced and other means will be exploited to overcome these problems. For instance, bikes and scooters will be used more oftenly and scientists will search for sources of clean energy to keep the environment clean.
In the summary and to conclude my point of view, science and technological development will affect many things in the future including cars.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...vel and go to their work rapidly and etc.. Thirdly, with the enlarging problems...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 253.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89328063241 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64626793627 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581027667984 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 618.680645161 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.8894323347 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.8 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 5.45110844103 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267087278994 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105225284446 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767525577083 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139411495514 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935354704683 0.0645574589148 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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