Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should spend the same amount of money on athletic activities as they spend on university libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
There is a growing trend that universities encourage students to exercise. Some people state that they should spend their time not only studying but also doing athletic activities, whereas others disagree with this opinion. I agree with the former view for the following reasons.
To begin with, this will let students do exercise on a daily basis, which keeps students healthy. Of course, there is a chance to get injured when contacting others or twisting the ankle. However, the benefit from becoming lean is much more significant than people feeling pain for a few weeks. For example, when I was a university student, the university established a new stadium, which allowed me to play baseball with my classmates every weekend. As a result, my weight dramatically decreased by 5 kg and my body became quite healthy.
Second, this will give students opportunities to bond with their teammates. Admittedly, they sometimes have to deal with conflicts between other members of the group, which lead them to exhausted significantly. Nonetheless, they make them familiarize each other. For instance, I belonged to a soccer team when I go to college. During training, we had to follow not only the teammates’ personalities but also our weak points. Consequently, we became close.
Third, students are highly likely to get more chances for finding a job when they graduate from university. Of course, they have to conduct long-time training to win competitions, which leads them to lose time for studying or completing assignments. However, this will make it easy to work in the related fields. It is quite normal that people who have in detail of baseball can work as a coach at stadiums and people who are good at Judo could work as bodyguards. This example shows that athletic activities play a pivotal role in their following careers.
In conclusion, given that playing sports positively affects their careers and health, universities should spend their money on athletic activities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1919504644 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85783166626 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603715170279 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6127027137 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.85 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.15 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196584776597 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543371882764 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650709378254 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132493286688 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899643727297 0.0645574589148 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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