Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is growing concern about the requirement of taking history classes for all university students. Some people state that students have to learn history even if their major is different from social science, whereas others disagree with this opinion. I agree with the former view for the following reasons.
To begin with, a glance at the historical headlines offers people a different view. Of course, they cannot afford to take irreverent subjects since they have a lot of things to do in their major fields and their schedules are extremely tight. However, this acts as a precursor to having a better understanding of the global news. For example, the past 2 decades witnessed thousands of wars and conflicts between the United States and Iraq. There were countless moments of tears and disappointments, which make us feel astonishingly terrible. Therefore, learning this tragedy leads to eliminating battles with other countries.
Second, learning previous incidents gives people an opportunity to bond with their families since the elderly’s assistance is necessary to complete the assignments in this subject. Admittedly, they are able to seek information using the Internet. Nevertheless, stories told by their grandparents are much more compelling than hearsay stories on the Web. For instance, while working on a history project, interviewing my grandparents was needed to know how our ancestors solved problems in world war 2. They told me interesting and vivid stories, which allowed me to appreciate them since we could not exist without the moments of tears and disappointment. As a result, I was really grateful to them and this made us become closer than ever before.
Third, history is tightly associated with other subjects such as geology and horticulture.
In fact, natural science is based on social science and everyone has to know the importance of this subject. Take China as an example, this country has recorded temperature and weather for a long period of time to optimize the cultivation of their crops. The past 2 centuries experience catastrophic climate change and Chinese people desperately dealt with this matter. As a result, they have in details of weather forecast and meteorology has significantly developed in the country.
In conclusion, given that joining history courses plays a pivotal role in their education, the government should encourage students to familiarize this subject.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 196, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, really, second, so, therefore, third, whereas, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, of course, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2057.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38481675393 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94781717661 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604712041885 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5930021867 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9523809524 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1904761905 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.80952380952 5.45110844103 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172621860651 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477289113909 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050394461631 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993130452414 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633098730817 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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