do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support
It is critically important the university has different facilities and all kinds of activities. personally, I believe it is quite useful for the students their university covers all kind of stuff and pay attention equally to all activities. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, when there is a different kind of activities such as social interaction and sport activity and it leads to decrease the mental pressure and increase both physically and mentally health of the person. when you can participate in a social activity if you have problem with something in university or your personal life you can tell to the other people and gets help, as a result, it helps your mental health, therefore, you can focus more on the study so, your grades increase or if you take part in the sports events it can help your physical health so you do not need to overcome physical problems during your study. My personal experience is a compelling example of this, 5 years ago in university I had anxiety problem so I decide to go the meeting with people have a similar problem so we helped together and it helps me a lot after that I never face this problem again as a consequence my grades pump up.
Secondly, when you face and interact with other people you can learn a ton of things about all kinds of aspects of personal and also academics life. Each person has their own unique experience and knowledge. So you can learn a lot from them and it helps you to get more experience and knowledge without facing the problems they faced in their life so you can save a great deal of time and energy. For instance 7 years ago in college, a conference was held about thesis and how to choose your thesis. I participated in those events, I learned different things so when I want to select my thesis I had knowledge and experience and it helps to select the best possible choice.
In conclusion, I strongly believe social activities and sports are important as the classes and academics program. This is because these events can help you to mentally and physically healthier and also teach you enormous different things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67774936061 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59257089634 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475703324808 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 586.8 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.7978243019 48.9658058833 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.642857143 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9285714286 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 5.45110844103 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167835577523 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635209568424 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579798834813 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110091700326 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452694872676 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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