Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Traditionally, parents serve as a role model for their children. And throughout history children have made their decision with the help of their parents. Personally, I believe that nowadays children are more independent. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, parent’s influence is on the decline due to the direct or indirect advancments of the internet. In modern era everyone can get their information they need from online sources. So you do not need somebody in your family to share their information. People easily have access to various sources about variety of subjects. Moreover, people can share their experiences so we can learn and make our decision with those experiences not only our parents.
My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. When I wanted to choose my field of study my parents always said to me you should choose an engirening filed. But, I did not like this field so, I browsed the internet I read a lot about engiering and I gained a lot of knowledge about this filed. For instance somebody wrote about pros and cons of this filed. When I read that article I decided not to choose this field. And, I could convince engerieng is not sutiable for me. So, I searched about mathematics and I felt in love with mathematics and I almost finish my master degree in mathematics.
Secondly, due to the technology problems which children will face them are more complicated. Therefore, parents have not good advices for their children. So, it is natural to expect children get advice from people who have a same problem. Or, atleast faced with similar problems in their life. Because, children think their parents could not give practical advices to them. As a result, they think they cannot rely on their parents.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that in recent years children less dependend on their parents in comparision to the past. This is because children have accssess to different sources, which are more complete and because children encounter with problems that parents did not face in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93277310924 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69428184165 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521008403361 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3203955926 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.375 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.875 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.79166666667 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225732110763 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657642400544 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469106906565 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131346063332 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487536362523 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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