Do you agree or disagree with the following
statement? Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Throughout the history of mankind, people always look for the better life. They do they best towards this aim. Personally, I believe the quality of life gradual increases over the time. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, technology has a central role in the modern life. Also, include different aspects of our generation. Yet modern technology progresses so rapidly that what may be today’s wild dream maybe be next year’s kitchen appliance. Everything with the help of technology became easier, because for everything, we now have a device to do their job more efficient and faster than our previous generation also it decreases the hard physical activities. As a result, we have a lot of leisure time to spend that on personal enjoyment. My personal experience is a compelling example of this, when I was a child I remembered my grandfather told me, they must do all of house chords with bare hands like cooking, washing, and drying and it took a lot of time from their and they get tired. Whereas nowadays the only thing we need to do for house chord is just push few buttons.
Secondly, because of growth of the population, there are more job opportunity. Also there are new jobs according to the needs of the modern people like computer programmer, pilot and etc. Due to this fact people nowadays can find more job with higher salary, so everyone at least they can afford their basic needs but in the past everything was different. our grandparents most work harder even for basic needs . Because of that people todays no longer worry about their necessaries, and they can focus on things they really like and provide various facilities for their family. For instance, I read in the newspaper, people in the past, because there was few jobs people must compete with each others and because of that employers exploit of their employee’s situation to cut their wages.
In conclusion I am of the opinion that we live better than our grandparents. This is because technology help us to do our job more easily and because there are more work to do people can get more salary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, whereas, at least, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75871313673 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58576610243 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55764075067 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6265988452 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4210526316 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6315789474 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57894736842 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131357542002 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392936598715 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289069915949 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868747023074 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020605874215 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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