Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people think that lying someone is better if truth is hurtful and have an impact on relationship. However, I totally disagree to the above statement. I feel telling truth is essential in any relationship for the following three reasons.
First of all, telling truth is a must because it builds trust in a relationship. Trust is the strongest pillar in any relationship. For example, Once, In classrom, I broke my friend's watch by mistake. At that time I could have thrown the broken watch and wouldn't let my friend know about the watch. But, I confronted my friend that the watch was broken by me and it was not intentional. Since that time my friend had developed trust in me and we became friends forever. Thus, telling truth is quite risky but it is a good thing.
Secondly, Truth is essential in any relationship because it helps to get better advice. Truth helps us to know the hard reality of any subject. For example, Once I was wearing a big round, bangle type of earings. It looked tacky on me. Many people laughed behind my back and made fun of me. My best friend dared to say the reality and I came to know that the earings doesn't suit me. Thus, truth can express harsh relaity and from harsh relaity we can develop our personality.
Finally, truth is the reason for long lasting long distance relationships. Nowadays, many people find difficulties maintaining long distance relationships and people lie to thier partners to avoid fights. Later, when the other partner comes to know about the lie it results in breakup. For example, my friend was in long distance relationship for 8 years and when my friend started living toghther with her partner she came to know about all the lies. Thus, lies resulted in the end of relationship. If my friend's partner would have lied and instead would have said the truth, thier relationship would have existed. Hence, truth is the reason for survial of long relationships.
In conclusion, Truth is important in any relationship. Listening to the truth is difficult but one of the ways of survival of any relationship.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75346260388 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73427829716 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481994459834 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6747987411 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.0 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8846153846 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73076923077 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.028549146061 0.236089414692 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0113950807805 0.076458572812 15% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0210519148802 0.0737576698707 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0237022705231 0.150856017488 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243021633403 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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