Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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class="MsoNormal">As everything in life class="is">is like a coin class="that">that has class="two">two different sides, people must weigh the pros and cons before jumping to the conclusions. After all, each and every class="question">question or class="topic">topic requires careful deliberation in class="that">that there are always multiple variables to the truth. class="even">even class="though">though class="some">some may adamantly believe class="that">that sports and class="social">social activities are as crucial as classes and libraries class="also">also class="should">should receive financial class="aid">aid equally at universities and colleges, I strongly think class="such">such class="opinion">opinion lacks coherence to class="some">some extent. In class="my">my humble class="opinion">opinion, these activities class="have">have a class="lot">lot of benefits class="such">such as developing physical class="health">health of students and class="it">it class="also">also attracts a class="lot">lot of students and funders from different states class="even">even more all over the world and I feel this way for class="two">two main reasons, class="which">which I'll explore in the following essay.
class="MsoNormal">class="first">first and foremost, The majority of individuals would agree with the notion class="that">that library and classes are key to be a successful person class="due">due to the class="fact">fact class="that">that the university or college students class="have">have a class="lot">lot of assignment and thesis to do in order to fulfil their academic credits. However, they don't concern their class="health">health more serious class="than">than others maybe class="it">it leads them to susceptible by serious illnesses on account of tons of days class="lack">lack of sleeping and class="hard">hard study of academics. Therefore class="social">social activities and sports give a chance to class="develop">develop their hobbies, getting a better shape and class="even">even more class="how">how class="can">can class="work">work as a class="team">team and class="how">how to communicate with each class="other">other class="through">through class="own">own class="interest">interest clubs and activities. For instance, class="my">my class="friend">friend class="nara">nara has won a scholarship from her dream college in the USA class="so">so class="she">she decided to class="work">work class="hard">hard all the class="time">time until class="she">she graduates this college with a red diploma. class="although">although class="she">she class="can">can go class="through">through a class="lot">lot of a class="hard">hard class="time">time in her freshman class="year">year class="she">she diagnosed having fatigue, obesity and seriously lacking in immune in the class="first">first class="year">year. In a result, A doctor advised her to class="take">take an extra class="sport">sport class="credit">credit from her college and class="she">she wanted to try class="it">it too. I didn't believe class="my">my eyes on her appearance and class="success">success in her sophomore class="year">year's summer because of the class="fact">fact class="that">that class="nara">nara took volleyball class with her friends class="so">so her appearance completely changed in a positive way. In addition, Her class="health">health class="is">is pretty good class="even">even class="though">though class="she">she still working class="hard">hard on her academic achievement. Interestingly, class="she">she attends class="also">also class="social">social clubs class="which">which class="is">is increased her number of friends and improve her communication skills.
class="MsoNormal">On top of this, Many prestigious colleges and universities class="have">have class="own">own sports class="team">team class="that">that class="is">is a symbol of those schools. if their sports class="team">team class="is">is successful in every field, more and more students choose those schools because of the interests of sports games class="such">such as basketball and football class="which">which are very popular in any country. According to the recent studies shows class="that">that More man students class="take">take their college or university just only based on their hobbies or interests of class="social">social activities or sports games class="than">than woman students. As you class="can">can see from this study, young man learners may class="have">have a higher possibility to choose their schools emotionally rather class="than">than based on their needs. Furthermore, class="it">it may increase the chance of university's get a fund from a prosperous alumnus or well-known celebrities. if they receive a class="lot">lot of money from any funders, class="it">it means class="that">that those activities class="can">can obtain more financial support from the universities and colleges.
class="MsoNormal">In summation, yes, class="it">it's virtually impossible to provide a completely satisfying answer to an open-ended class="question">question. class="although">although the jury may be out on this given essay class="topic">topic, we class="can">can come to a mutual agreement sports and class="social">social clubs are equally important as classes and libraries class="also">also they class="should">should grant financial class="aid">aid class="due">due to the reasons and details mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 13.8261648746 239% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 52.1666666667 155% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 6579.0 1977.66487455 333% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 631.0 407.700716846 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 10.4263074485 4.8611393121 214% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 5.01195704033 4.48103885553 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 10.8546616422 2.67179642975 406% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 322.0 212.727598566 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51030110935 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 1698.3 618.680645161 275% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.7 1.51630824373 178% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 31.0 9.59856630824 323% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 12.0 3.51792114695 341% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.690438156 48.9658058833 259% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 313.285714286 100.406767564 312% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 30.0476190476 20.6045352989 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95238095238 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0714323096406 0.236089414692 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515158250628 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0192141317009 0.0737576698707 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0564304338678 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165748671061 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.7 11.7677419355 363% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -52.03 58.1214874552 -90% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 6.10430107527 298% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.0 10.1575268817 276% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 43.81 10.9000537634 402% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 184.0 86.8835125448 212% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 10.002688172 205% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 28.0 10.247311828 273% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
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