Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? When people solve problems as a group, they come up with better solutions that if they were to try to solve the problem individually. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Teamwork is one of the key components when it comes to solving a problem. Problems can be both at the personal and professional levels, but solving them as a united team makes it easier to get the problem rectified. In my opinion, when people solve problems as a group, they come up with better solutions that if they were to try to solve the problem individually.
Last year I faced a market query from one of my clients in Africa. One of the company's product was on the verge of marketing but due to some lack of information, it was not given final approval. I discussed the problem with one of my colleague and he suggested that we should discuss it with fellow colleagues in the department since according to us the product was submitted in its perfect shape. To my surprise, when we discussed it with the other team members we got multiple inputs from each and everyone and I was able to figure out my mistake. Therefore, the teamwork helped me to get the product registered and also the client appreciated our response for the lacking information. Sometimes, we are not able to see our errors since we prepare the responses to the best of our abilities. At this particular moment, we should always get the final submission checked or approved by two-three members of the team so as to not face a problem.
Recently, my friend had changed his job. In the new organization, he was given a project which he had to finish within two days time. He was not aware much about the core idea of the project since he joined recently, but since he was known team player, he managed to gather a team of four employees and was able to complete the project. If he would have thought of doing it all by himself, he was sure he wouldn't be able to complete it. Also, another team member's inputs were equally acknowledged by him and when he presented his work he made sure that every individual member was credited. This teamwork ability was appreciated by everybody in the organization and he was acknowledged for acting towards company's benefit rather thinking of getting appreciated individually.
A problem I faced last month was that I had to organize a wedding anniversary party for my closest friend. I knew that being a wedding planner I will organize it pretty well. However, on the day of the function, the bakery shop refused to provide the cake at the last moment. I was so tensed and shared the problem with my other friends as my whole team was busy with preparations. One of my friends suggested a bakery shop and finally, we were able to get the cake as desired. This was a problem I had encountered on the spot, but it was a collective team effort since my mind alone stopped working and my friend took the charge and solved the problem. Two minds can work out better for a problem rather single mind in a tense situation.
In conclusion, I believe that problem solving when in a group offer's much better solution rather thinking alone.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'make'?
Suggestion: make
...vels, but solving them as a united team makes it easier to get the problem rectified....
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Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: FELLOW_CLASSMATE[1]
Message: Use simply 'colleagues'.
Suggestion: colleagues
...uggested that we should discuss it with fellow colleagues in the department since according to us...
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Line 3, column 917, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...proved by two-three members of the team so as to not face a problem. Recently, my fri...
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Line 5, column 344, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had thought'?
Suggestion: had thought
...was able to complete the project. If he would have thought of doing it all by himself, he was sure...
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Line 5, column 406, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...doing it all by himself, he was sure he wouldnt be able to complete it. Also, another t...
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Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pretties'?
Suggestion: pretties
...ng a wedding planner I will organize it pretty well. However, on the day of the functi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, so, therefore, well, as to, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2424.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 529.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58223062382 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79583152331 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65139704085 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461247637051 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 770.4 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5732824081 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0416666667 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.70833333333 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20275891089 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754431353862 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134376796836 0.0737576698707 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183303042738 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170976636341 0.0645574589148 265% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.