Do you agree or disagree with the following statement When people succeed it is entirely because of hard work Luck has nothing to do with their success Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? When people succeed, it is entirely because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with their success. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

success is critically important step in our live. evryone should focus and find the way that would help him/her to reach the goal. personally, I believe that luck play an essential rule for success. I feel this way for two important reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
first and foremost, all young people now aday are highly educated, and during applying for work or advanced study, there would be high level of competence. all of teh applicants have same certificates and all of the they did hard work. my ouwn personla experience is a compelling example of this. I came to USA five years a go, I worked hard to finish all my requirments in order to get acceptance in the advanced standing program in dentitry. when I started my application in dental school I noticed that a myriad of people from different part of the world were applying too. during interview we were 35 applicants and all of us were having same qualifications and we all worked hard. Moreover all of us did such a great during interview and we passed all the admission exams. the comitte were so rude, however, at the end they were confused who would be the perfect to get in into the program. As a result, the comittee decided to pick the first 20 people acording to alphabtic order and who was his or her name was in the first page gets in. Had not the luck helped the people to get into the program, no one from the first list would get in.
in addition, due to the fact that vast number of student has increased, the comittee asigned different exam style for all students in order to get in. soem of the questions in the exam are easy and some of them are hard. personally I knew soem people did not worked hard and because the had a great luck, there exam were so easy. on the other hand, people who worked hard got the diffcult questions in the exam. for example, during toefl exams, I knew some people did prepare the exam for more than two years and every time tehy appear to teh exam, they got hard sample becaus they are not lucky, other people, however, got easy sample and got their desired score. for that reason, luck was essential for those people to acheive their score not the hard work.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, for example, i feel, in addition, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44059405941 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31374085105 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502475247525 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1535159207 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137073227553 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485533693803 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414672798942 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916233108176 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271066364977 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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