Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People possess different perspectives about how the workers can be more satisfied. One group believes that the tasks should be similar, while another group thinks that the tasks should be diverse. In my opinion, I think it would be ideal that the workers can have many different types of tasks rather than similar one based on two following reasons.First of all, the diversity of tasks can be more exciting for workers, and the excitement can make workers more satisfied. For example, I was an assistant for my professor during my first year of university. Unfortunately, my responsibility was to reply to emails every day for my professor, which was extremely boringfor me. In turn, I quitted my job after one week. On the other hand, I worked as a research assistant when I was a junior. Instead of repeating routine jobs, I was authorized to survey for research, conduct experiments and also join discussion with other students. I was satisfied with the job because it enables me to explore more fields.Second, the excellence of workers directly leads to their satisfaction with their jobs. To be more specific, if workers only do similar tasks all day long, they would make mistakes because we are not robots. While robots can repeat jobs perfectly, people can easily make mistakes because they are bored by their job context. In contrast, if the workers have many different types of tasks, it would simulate them to think. While thinking the job can be better from time to time.Admittedly, there might be some benefits about doing similar tasks, such as easier to dispatch jobs or easier to train newcomers. Nevertheless, the mindset about the workers can not be improved since we are not robots. The feelings of the workers must be the first priority to consider while discussing self-satisfaction at work.To sum up, from above mentioned, it is beneficial for the workers to have diverse jobs because the excitement and excellence of mindset can bring them satisfaction. That is why I strongly agree that the workers should have many different types of tasks for their satisfaction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ngly agree that the workers should have many different types of tasks for their satisfaction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, nevertheless, second, so, while, as to, for example, i think, in contrast, such as, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10787172012 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12191947121 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513119533528 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2548332326 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4375 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 5.45110844103 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231064133572 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819128350355 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798985442135 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231064133572 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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