Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Young people nowadays don t give enough time to helping their communities
Nowadays, the values in society changed. People pay attention to other's issues less than before. This matter is because of some reasons, such as much involvement in the work environment or financial issues. This matter is more prevalent in new generations than before. Many older adults state that people at younger ages are very selfish and care about nothing but themselves. However, the Youngers refute this opinion by saying that helping the community is being changed and social issues are also important. I cannot entirely agree with this statement and think the Youngers have more influence on their society than the elders at their youth. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is changing society's conditions, such as communication, political and social, helping society change. For example, our ancestors were beneficial in society by working for the government and improving the country's economic conditions. Although many youngers are not working for the government straightly, they are usually more profitable for the economy. For example, they start themselves' businesses, especially start-up businesses, and make more income than their fathers' from the government. More money causes more taxes and finally would be more beneficial for the government and community.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that while society has new demands, it is an inevitable statement that people, specifically Youngers, had to react to these social demands. One of the essential issues in this modern era is the high pollution rate by garbage due to the rapid city development without providing appropriate infrastructure. So, the governor and municipal cannot afford to solve this problem. Some volunteer groups that most of their members are at a young age help municipally clarify polluted areas. Another example is that as poor people's population increases due to the wrong government's policies. As the government cannot help them, many Youngers establish some associations and glean money for them or cook warm food for them.
In conclusion, the human- being, of any age and any gender, cannot be a blasé creature besides its living environment. Many society members, else some blasé one person, know the social issues as their matter and help solve them.
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- TPO 2870
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, however, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1991.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38108108108 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75150665945 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586486486486 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6243311589 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8095238095 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.619047619 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52380952381 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109862917262 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0322927504085 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406994118332 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.066183321969 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399533199573 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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