Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Parents are always involved in their children's growth. They always want to control their younger's actions and direct them in a way that they like. One of the main challenges of parents who live in new modern era is their guy's educational issues. However, some people state that these challenges were also in the past and parents involved in their younger's educational matters as much as today. This opinions made a controversial subjects in society. To me, I definitely agree with the first statement.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that in last decades education is not main affair of whole society. In the past, many people's challenges were about financial issues. And many parents believed that their children should help family to gain more money by working additionally. This matter was more foremost for boys in family. For girls there was another problem. Most of the families had religious beliefs and they forbid studying, and somehow going outside for girls due to these severe beliefs. For example, all of my aunts are illiterate because my grandfather prevent them to study and they got married when they were just 15. The age which many scientists state that children had to play and study.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that there is severe competition between families. In this modern era, most of the families have severe competitions in many subjects. One of the most competitions between families is the children's prosperity, specifically in education. So, many parents force their children to study hard and go to a medical or an engineering university in higher education level instead of following their favorites. For instance, my brother had a great talent in painting and drew beautiful paintings. However, my parents considered painting as a waste of time and forced him to study engineering. After a while my brother was fired from the university due to his low grades.
Although the aforementioned reasons are the first ones which cross the mind at first glance, they are by no means the only reasons available. Actually, there is another subtle point which must be borne in mind is that as many parents did not have some opportunities to study, specifically at higher education level, they force their children due to compensate their childhood complications. For example, my aunt wanted to be a medical doctor and he was banned by his parents. Now, he forces his daughter to study in a medical university and he always says I want to see you as a doctor, though i couldn't be.
In conclusion, I think it is not good thing that parents involve in their children's education, but due to the last generation's conditions, this issue is inevitable and I hope this is being solved in new generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2310.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 464.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97844827586 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74874309185 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 720.9 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.9432106612 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8461538462 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8461538462 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247252419307 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068833143642 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741754756894 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145115518956 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691943912219 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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