Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
There has been a debate for a long time whether older people enjoy their life as mush as young people. In my opinion, I agree that young people enjoy their life a lot more than older people. I feel this way for three reasons which i will explore in the following essay.
Firstly, young people are more open to trying on new things and taking risk in their lives whereas older people are more mature and hesitant ,and avoid taking risks in life. Trying new things give a adrenaline rush and makes life more enjoyable. My own experience is a compelling exam of this. My mother was very fond of amusement parks and she loved riding all the rides there. So, last year on her birthday I gifted her a ticket to one of her favorite amusement park. But, she declined it and instead told me to go because it was too risky for her to sit on the rides at such an old age. This example demonstrates that older people avoid risky thing even though they get happiness from those things and thus, they enjoy their life less as they age.
Secondly, as people age their health deteriorates and they are not as energetic as they were before. Young children still have a lot of energy do to various stuff and live life to the fullest. While, as a person ages they start to face a lot of health problem and become weak. For instance, Five year ago, My whole family went camping and there were a lot of mountains there for us to go on trekking. First day, all of us went for trekking and it was a pleasant experience, we enjoyed a lot and got to spend family time together. However, the second when we went to trekking my father and mother were not able to complete it because their joints started paining and from halfway we came back. Because of this incident our whole plan was ruined and I also didn't get to complete the trek. Thus, health problems and weakness associated with old age makes it's difficult for a person to truly enjoy life.
Thirdly, there is generation gap between older and younger people which affects the happiness of a person. Many old people follow certain norms and traditions and it is very difficult for them to change their thinking. For instance, my grandma passed away when she was only 65 and my grandpa felt very lonely. He used to be very quiet and sad all the time. At that time we had a grandma in my neighbourhood to whom my grandpa started talking to and felt alive and started being happy again. My father told them to get married and my grandpa denied it, just because he thought it was wrong thing to do. In this advanced world his thinking was still orthodox. Thus, many times old people can't expand their thinking with the advancing generation and sacrifice their own happiness and enjoyment of life.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that young people enjoy more than the older people. This is because old people don't take risk, they are not physically strong and their thinking is orthodox.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, thus, whereas, while, as to, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2398.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 533.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4990619137 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80487177365 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24093248144 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474671669794 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 743.4 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4162313436 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6428571429 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0357142857 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23209525915 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699060255624 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855808675488 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164641521955 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764567630254 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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