Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people enjoy life more than old people do. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.
I disagree with the idea that the young enjoy life more than the old. Of course, life in younger age is still enjoyable and there are many ways only young people can do activities. However, I believe people can pull more fun later in their life.
First, old people have a better financial condition in general. Some activity requires money actually. For example, I want to go to Barcelona to see the great churches and feel its culture on-site. However, I haven't had chance because it's too expensive for me to travel to Spain. Unfortunately, young people have to choose the way they enjoy within their financial limits.
Second, people get understanding on your own interest or the way to enjoy life as getting older. People try various activities in their earlier life and often feel some of the activities are not as much fun as they expected. Until you experience the activity, you cannot know how you feel it or whether you like it or not. Although I have tried many sports so far, baseball, soccer, basketball, table tennis, martial arts and so on, I finally found that hiking or cycling in the beautiful rural area is the most enjoyable time for me. It have take over 30 years to come up with my real preference, but there might be another activity which fascinates me more! I learned that the much I experience, more precisely understand what I need. This allows old people to focus on what they like rather than waisting time and money on boring activities.
Someone might insist older people have worse health status which prevent them from doing certain activities. That's partially true, a 80-year old person is able to stand on top of Mt. Everest or to run 100 meters in 10 seconds. But it doesn't matter. Unless you want to win in the Olympic games, you can find your own goals which is challenging or enjoyable enough in your age. For me, hiking my wife for one day and reaching to the beautiful sceanary in the region is exciting enough.
In summary, I believe the old people can enjoy their life than the young due to financial situation and their insight to their own preference.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...nd feel its culture on-site. However, I havent had chance because its too expensive fo...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...es in their earlier life and often feel some of the activities are not as much fun as they ...
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Line 5, column 539, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...a is the most enjoyable time for me. It have take over 30 years to come up with my r...
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Line 7, column 110, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ent them from doing certain activities. Thats partially true, a 80-year old person is...
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Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rtain activities. Thats partially true, a 80-year old person is able to stand on ...
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Line 7, column 235, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...to run 100 meters in 10 seconds. But it doesnt matter. Unless you want to win in the O...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, still, for example, in general, in summary, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66397849462 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43934839022 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564516129032 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8257459503 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.75 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251760013023 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765580395644 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700632703844 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150678844464 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663572728964 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...nd feel its culture on-site. However, I havent had chance because its too expensive fo...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...es in their earlier life and often feel some of the activities are not as much fun as they ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 539, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...a is the most enjoyable time for me. It have take over 30 years to come up with my r...
^^^^
Line 7, column 110, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ent them from doing certain activities. Thats partially true, a 80-year old person is...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rtain activities. Thats partially true, a 80-year old person is able to stand on ...
^
Line 7, column 235, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...to run 100 meters in 10 seconds. But it doesnt matter. Unless you want to win in the O...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, still, for example, in general, in summary, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66397849462 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43934839022 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564516129032 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8257459503 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.75 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251760013023 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765580395644 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700632703844 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150678844464 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663572728964 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...nd feel its culture on-site. However, I havent had chance because its too expensive fo...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...es in their earlier life and often feel some of the activities are not as much fun as they ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 539, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...a is the most enjoyable time for me. It have take over 30 years to come up with my r...
^^^^
Line 7, column 110, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ent them from doing certain activities. Thats partially true, a 80-year old person is...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rtain activities. Thats partially true, a 80-year old person is able to stand on ...
^
Line 7, column 235, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...to run 100 meters in 10 seconds. But it doesnt matter. Unless you want to win in the O...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, still, for example, in general, in summary, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66397849462 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43934839022 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564516129032 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8257459503 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.75 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251760013023 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765580395644 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700632703844 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150678844464 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663572728964 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.