Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. Young people enjoy life more than old people. Do use specific examples to support your opinion.
A lot of people derive pleasure from things differently. Some will say that old people have enjoyed life the most as they have better experience and knowledge of things than young people. However, life is constantly evolving and there are a lot better ways to do things. I totally agree with the prompt that says young people enjoy life more than old people do. My reasons for taking this side will be explored in subsequent paragraphs.
First, young people are a lot more energetic than older people. A lot of fun things require energy to do. This makes it more likely to be done by young people as older people have become feeble either due to age or sickness. I remember when we went on a holiday trip last summer to Miami with my parents and grandparents. My grandparents were not involved in most of the fun activities like surfing, hiking, and biking. They mostly just watched us do these activities without getting involved. When my grandparents were younger, they, loved hiking and biking but their age has limited them from having great fun.
Second, young people are usually more healthy than old people. Aging comes with a lot of sicknesses like diabetes, stroke, and even certain degenerating illnesses. These illnesses tend to prevent them from indulging in certain activities or even prevent them from eating certain food. My granddad currently does not take alcohol and he does not eat anything containing sugar. This is due to his poor health. But when he was much younger, he usually loves to take alcohol and chocolates. However, the condition of his health has greatly limited him from certain life enjoyment.
Last, old people hardly take risks. It is usually very enjoyable when you are exploring or doing things for the first time. Old people are most times very scared of trying out new things whereas, young people love to try new things and this makes the experience incredible. For example, when we all went on holiday with my grandparents, I tried out new things like swimming and riding on a horse. The experience was enjoyable whereas, my grandparents were too scared to try it out as they thought that it is too risky.
To sum up, without a modicum of equivocation, I do agree that young people enjoy life more than old people do as explained in the above paragraphs.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, whereas, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78894472362 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51617830324 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484924623116 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 586.8 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8072696093 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.24 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.92 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329966806778 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106509849543 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135154108709 0.0737576698707 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240783993483 0.150856017488 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137088438717 0.0645574589148 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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