Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. Young people enjoy life more than old people. Do use specific examples to support your opinion.
A lot of people derive pleasure from things differently. Some will say that old people have enjoyed life the most as they have better experience and knowledge of things than do young people. However, life is constantly evolving and there are a lot more better ways to do things. I totally agree with the prompt that says young people enjoy life more than old people do. My reasons for taking this side will be explored in subsequent paragraphs.
First, young people are a lot more energetic than older people. A lot of fun things require energy to do. This makes it more likely to be done by young people as older people have become feeble either due to age or sickness. I remember when we went on a holiday trip last summer to Miami with my parents and grandparents. My grandparents were not involved in most of the fun activities like surfing, hiking, and biking. They mostly just watched us do these activities without getting involved. When my grandparents were younger, they, loved hiking and biking but their age has limited them from having great fun.
Second, young people are usually more healthy than old people. Aging comes with a lot of sicknesses like diabetes, stroke, and even certain degenerating illnesses. These illnesses tend to prevent them from indulging in certain activities or even prevent them from eating certain food. My granddad currently does not take alcohol and he does not eat anything containing sugar. This is due to his poor health. But when he was much younger, he usually loves to take alcohol and chocolates. However, the condition of his health has greatly limited him from certain life enjoyment.
Last, old people hardly take risks. It is usually very enjoyable when you are exploring or doing things for the first time. Old people are most times very scared of trying out new things whereas, young people love to try new things and this makes the experience incredible.
To sum up, without a modicum of equivocation, I do agree that young people enjoy life more than old people do as explained in the above paragraphs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...constantly evolving and there are a lot more better ways to do things. I totally agree with...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, whereas, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82253521127 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.472376249 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515492957746 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9372020867 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4347826087 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4347826087 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.39130434783 5.45110844103 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363270776834 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117781274269 0.076458572812 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140638710743 0.0737576698707 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257105843811 0.150856017488 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13745368823 0.0645574589148 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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