Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A controversial issue relating to whether the young adults have influence on the future of our society or not, has been brought the attention of general public. Relevant people argue that youths are not consider responsible enough to have influence in such big changes. In my opinion, young generation really have a great influence on the changes of the entire society.
First of all, by being the majority part of population, young generation is considered as an important component of society. For instance, statistics have revealed that 89 percent of population consist of young adults. This numbers is highly significant when it comes to the voices that need to be heard by authorities. Big changes have been taken place because new generation were eager of developing new things, which they think would make their world a better place to live. According to this evidence, we cannot deny that young adults not only have influence on new changes, but also their new ideas will impact society as a whole.
Second of all, without a doubt, young people have influence on decisions that will determine the future because they see the world different than any other generation. They are innovative, have different vision about the new society. For example, these past decades, the development of technology has shown us that new critical ideas of young adults made this a reality. The whole society is benefiting from it. If new generation did not came up with new innovations, probably we would have not had the opportunity to relish the advancement that we have today. This tells us that new generation has contributed with their new ideas, and have had a great influence on the entire population.
In conclusion, young generation always have had a huge influence on our future society. This is because they are the majority of the population, and because we are already experiencing the changes , which are the result of their influence on the civilization. This is going to continue in the future, also.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... not, has been brought the attention of general public. Relevant people argue that youths are ...
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Line 1, column 204, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
...levant people argue that youths are not consider responsible enough to have influence in...
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Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... considered as an important component of society. For instance, statistics have r...
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Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...re because they see the world different than any other generation. They are innovati...
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Line 5, column 439, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'come'
Suggestion: come
...ting from it. If new generation did not came up with new innovations, probably we wo...
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Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... we are already experiencing the changes , which are a result of their influence o...
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Line 7, column 296, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...his is going to continue in the future, also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.0752688172 297% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99088145897 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70957218964 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504559270517 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.790449365 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5882352941 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3529411765 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194609592362 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724356068306 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524552882752 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13321366618 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420212305108 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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