Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
It is essential for people to be truthful and honest to each other. It is thought by some people that truth is always necessary to be told, so that people could strengthen their relationships. However, this essay will discuss why it is in fact, people should skillfully deviate from the truth, according to different circumstances.
Contrary to the belief that people should be always honest with other, evidence shows that depending on the situation adults tend to manipulate the truth based on what they think is a better solution for the moment. For instance, statistics have revealed that 87 percent of people who did not say the truth, they were able to successfully resolve complex situations that they have faced throughout their lives. On the other hand, people who said the truth all the time, fail to achieve good results or outcomes on the critical situations. According to this, I believe that it is better that people try to not tell the truth by not doing any harm.
Secondly, there is no doubt that all of us have sometime in our lives said a white lie. Humans use these white lies for different reasons such as not making their friends or relatives to feel bad about something or solve a conflict. For example, my experience is a compelling example of this. About ten years ago, when I was a teenager, I and my friend were invited in a party. We were very excited and putted a lot of effort to find beautiful dresses. But, we did not see our chosen dresses before the party. We thought that would be a surprise for both of us. My father had to drop us at the party, so we went to pick up my friend. When she came out of the door, I knew that something was not right. Actually, I did not like her dress and in meanwhile I could not tell her the truth because it was too late. I just said that she looked beautiful. Overall, sometimes we should not say the truth because not always is useful..
To sum up, I believe that telling the truth is not the most important consideration in people's relationships.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, while, as to, for example, for instance, in fact, no doubt, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54098360656 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53364001406 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540983606557 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5272171344 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.95 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179106642132 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054732024893 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656140390708 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143662438853 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070354681025 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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