Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Although every relationship has specific principles and considerations for itself, no one can purely rely on their instinct in making any important decisions without building trust in the first place. In this regard, some people believe that telling the truth is the most significant cornerstone in any relationship. On the other extreme of the rope, others believe that telling lies or making things up occasionally are sometimes help in a particular situation. Although both sides take their positions, personally speaking, I think that the first group carries more weight, I will explain my reasons to prove my points of view.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that telling the truth help understand each other better. Take an example in a company where everyone is willing to say what they think is right without afraid of the boss or any transparent negative causes that could harm their career or paycheck in some way. This company would easily thrive for better and grow aggressively; new ideas blossom and drawbacks are not tolerated but instead being torn apart to find the root causes and fix it. Moreover, many clients will turn to happy customers when knowing that a reliable and loyal employer is taking their problems seriously and professionally.
The second point that comes to my mind is that telling the truth can help to prevent potential break-ups in any relationship. To be more specific, although there are different conflicts in any relationship; however, members being honest with each other put much more efforts to settle disagreements to protect their relation against any problems. For example, a love relationship between two people could experience a variety of comments, even the bad ones from family members and friends who do not understand clearly about their situation but still trying to give out feedbacks. If both people are not willing to put aside their ego and willing to genuinely listen to what is right for them and tell the truth with the partner so that he or she can understand and together find a solution on that matter. Then sooner or later, the issue would become more significant and could not be cured. The result would be devastating for both.
Last but not least, telling the truth keeps you and your partner healthier, both physicality and mentality. Telling a lie is not suitable for anyone's mental health, considers every time he or she has to think of a reasonable event or cause to make it up. The brain will release a toxic chemical called Cortisol and gradually could become worst. The body will suffer as well due to lack of energy, and one could feel so much intense, and the body is always in the "alert" state that quickly drains all the power. Hence, the more people do not conceal any subject from each other, the more they will be a success in their relationship.
In conclusion, taking the above reasons into account, I firmly believe that not only does behavior based on honesty increase confidence between people, but it also encourages them to resolve their conflict, increase the scope of their friendship and build a productive long-term relationship which has great achievements for them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: helped
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'ideas'' or 'idea's'?
Suggestion: ideas'; idea's
...e for better and grow aggressively; new ideas blossom and drawbacks are not tolerated...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, then, well, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2681.0 1977.66487455 136% => OK
No of words: 531.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04896421846 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80035803286 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75967480379 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 287.0 212.727598566 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540489642185 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 807.3 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.8916269945 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.05 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.55 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184967644093 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558604363671 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496182912838 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100515615676 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382535122664 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.