Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Universities and colleges have to play an important role in developing the country and improving social quality. Those are the places which shape the future of the country. Most thinks that universities and colleges are as academic oriented places and they should give more focus and financial supports to classes and libraries. But this is not true and nonacademic activates like sports and social activities are equally important. This can be explained as follows.
First of all sports and social activities can give fame to the university and country. For instance, when I'm studying for my first degree at University of Colombo Sri Lanka, my best friend Bill got selected to Sri Lankan cricket team and he was contributed to win Cricket world cup to Sri Lanka. Because of that our university got lot of attention from world, government, sport medias, which caused to increase the reputation of the university. After that university got funds from many organizations, not only to sports but also for academic departments and researches also. This states that supporting sports and social activities can have benefits to the overall university.
Secondly sports and social activities helps to improve social and leadership skills of students. These skills cannot get from classes or libraries. For an example, current Prime Minister of Sri Lanka studied from my university (University of Colombo). Most frequently he acknowledges to Debate society and Rotract club of the university, as it is the place where he improved his leadership skills. As this example points out to have better leaders, class education is not enough. Therefore universities and colleges needs to give equal financial support to sports and social activities as well.
Last but not least, sports and social activities helps students to reduce academic stress. University and college environment is full of assignments and exams and might affect to mental health of students. But having sports and social activities can help them in such situations. When I'm at high school, I was really stressed due to exams and assignments. Beacuse of this scored very low in some subjects. Then one friend suggest me to join to the Music Club. After I became a member at music club, I felt big release and my stress level was reduced. It was also help me in my studies. So from experience I can say that supporting sports and social activities can indirectly help academics.
In conclusions, now it is clear that in a university or a college non-academic activities plays important role as same as academic activities. The purpose of these institutions should be broad. Their goal is to produce a balance persons not just a book reader. For that supporting sports and social activities are essential. Therefore authorities should give equal priorities to both academic and nonacademic , in financial report.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 34.0 13.8261648746 246% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2413.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 465.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18924731183 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85408128691 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501075268817 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 757.8 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3332768361 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4333333333 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26850577266 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077018336483 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705166595082 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173031502217 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402302601573 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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