Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, with the accelerating improvement of societies, people usually pursue news through different ways. some people believe that media including newspapers, televisions, and so forth are less reliable source of news to be followed. From my vantage point, I think that the statement is wrong and people can trust to these sources and in what follows the most persuasive reasons are drawn.
The first compelling reason corroborating my idea is that due to wide diversity of sources people can follow their own pleasure sources. In this regard, the more popularity of media, the more subscriber. people would be fully aware of accuracy of news only some few after it release. By way of illustration, I usually follow news through internet websites. after delving much, I found bbc which is a foreign news broadcaster and judge news unbiasedly. Nevertheless, my brother prefers to pursue his predilection based on VOA website. Had it not been wide range of websites, the question would have been reasonable but in this circumstances is not. therefore, as the example clarifies due to manifold source of news they are reliable.
The second exquisite point mentioning here is that, these websites have unlimited source of budget and some strict regulation are usually enacted to preserve human confidence. However, some may cast doubt that the source of budget is irrecoverable and this is why news would come out unclearly. indeed, these critics are not fully aware of advertisement industry which benefit company. Recently, a new research program conducted at University of Manchester demonstrates that, yearly, due to unlimited income from advertisement, bbc doubled his income. Not only does bbc absorbed the confidence of people but also double his income each year. therefore, these source of news are reliable since they want to increase their assets.
The third notion mentioning here is that with the accelerating rate of technology, people are obliged to stick to it. indeed, news can be validated on the spur of moment after it emerges. people can test the news by different gadget such as Laptop, mobile phone, cafe net and so on. As a case in this point, one who are in the middle of protestor can follow its news through internet and validate it. Had it not been reliable source of news, it would have been automatically removed since not one would purchase that newspaper, television program or internet website.
All in all, as the above-mentioned examples have illustrated, media including T.V, internet and newspapers are reliable source of news. Not only do they include a wide range of sources and people can delve to finding their pleasure, but also it provide reliable source of money to broadcaster and due to the money they spread trust-worthy news.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, third, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2352.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 453.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19205298013 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82813766371 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501103752759 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 738.0 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9413715305 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0868338213219 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0285142532954 0.076458572812 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0269260262925 0.0737576698707 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0595661070746 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277151972113 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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