Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Nowadays people are trying their best to have a successful career and having some specific skills might be able to provide them with the opportunities they need to prosper in their life. I think that life, especially modern life, has never been easy to handle and as the world goes on it might even get harder. Thus, in my opinion, gaining abilities such as being able to devise plans and to organize things are necessary for people to be prosperous. There are certain reasons behind this statement that I will clearly explain in the following essay.
First of all, people, sooner or late, might want to live separately from their parents. For instance, students, after spending some years in their home town universities might decide to study abroad, for they seek better educations or facilities that are not available at their country or, many people will get married in some point of their life and have to live independently. Therefore, people having these conditions, comprising a great proportion of the people of world, have to obtain skills in order to survive in complex situations that they might meet during their life while living all by themselves. People who can organize and plan can handle hard situations better. Moreover, they will have the ability to come up with various solutions to problems they face, finding a way out of it to be successful. Without these skills people will just stay where they are for years and will not advance in their life. For instance, fire years ago I decided to migrate to spain to study for my PhD. Before getting there, I used to do all stuff on my own, without asking help from everyone. I even planned the whole process of migration solely. When I got there, the circumstances were not suitable for me as everything was new to me. Having some sort of skills like planning and organizing helped me to manage everything there and reach the position that I currently am.
Second, aside from the benefits that people gain from having the abilities to plan and organize in harsh life situations, another reason that makes me believe the mentioned skills are mandatory in these days is that, it will help people to follow their dreams and make their ideas to come true. Meaning, every single person has many dreams and they want to do something about if they get the chance. In my view, people will have more chance to, start their own business for instance, if they own some certain skills. The ability to make proper plans will help them to create the map and every single step needed to achieve what they want. Although the world will not stop for us and it’s getting more complex everyday, I believe the ability to manage and organize will aid people avoid troubles in their way to the success. I have subscribed to many monthly scientific magazines because they offer useful information. Last month, there was an article followed by several interviews, about the ways rich people, owning big companies, actually got rich. Surprisingly, without any exception, every each of them confirmed that the path they took was so hard and seemed impossible in other’s view. But another fact that they all mentioned was that there were skills like being able to plan for every step before taking it and organizing resources and time was the most effective abilities that made this happen for them
All in all, considering all the above reasons, I think modern life is complex and will go on to be harder in the future and people have to gain abilities like planning and organizing to be able to reach what they want and to prosper.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 715, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for instance, i think, sort of, such as, first of all, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 89.0 52.1666666667 171% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2972.0 1977.66487455 150% => OK
No of words: 621.0 407.700716846 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78582930757 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.991980728 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42940365546 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 295.0 212.727598566 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475040257649 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 931.5 618.680645161 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.1855120272 48.9658058833 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.833333333 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.875 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243510832362 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073722729303 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407381964671 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176208385769 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021765751593 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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