Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
In these days there has been much controversy about being well-organized in our fast-changing advanced world and cause quite a stir in numerous circles and camps. Different people may give various types of responses to this question based upon their social, familiar and even cultural question. Although majority of people contemplate that there is no need for setting the schedule ahead of the time , other posit that being organized looms large in our prosperity and efficiency in the competitive society . However, when it comes to me I conspicuously declare that organization and arrangement bring about tremendous advantage for students, employees and married youth on account of the following reasons.
To begin with, student require organized schedule to enhance their academic performance. Nowadays student should deal with huge amount of assignments in a limited time such as presentation, submitting papers, taking part in confronces to well-prepared for their future goals and career. As a result, they should think thoroughly about their tasks and draw a timetable for each task and implement them faithfully. The more student effort make in the university, the brighter future and grand occupation they would attain.
Second, workers and employees nowadays are overwhelmed by tremendous duties and. For instance, an employee should plan for even his/her dress up neatly and tidy in his/her workplace a day before showing up at work since If he/she did not care about his/her responsibility, she/he would be fired and abandon his/her career. Take an example for a hotel manager, he should have a precise plan for the gathering of the employees, financial budget, services and satisfaction of passenger, employees ‘paycheque, renovation and restoration,… and could you imagine If his plan was not clarified ahead of time what a catastrophic consequences come about.
Last but not least, young generation should be organized in their daily life in order to significance o family. In modern days and with development of human society married people are swamped by wide range of tasks in and out of their home. As result they should plan for every minute they spend at home. Not only children benefit from well-organized parents, but also spouse get advantage from intentional plans by spending time altogether efficiently.
To put it in a nutshell, a growing body of the paragraphs supports this undeniable fact that our developing world getting more sophisticated in comparison of the past time and coerce us to alter our policy and strategy to augment the quality of our lives. Back to beginning controversial question, I cite a quite a bias in favor of this indispensable fact that well prepared and organized for our tasks has a profound impression on our daily life, academic accomplishment and career achievement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, second, so, well, for instance, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2391.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32516703786 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05775819877 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599109131403 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 745.2 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.6774436299 48.9658058833 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.647058824 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4117647059 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132314444711 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413607906717 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032445584345 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0696955931834 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324103195926 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 58.1214874552 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 86.8835125448 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.