Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Whenever it comes to the issue that whether fast change of world make people live less happy and less satisfied, there are nevers short of discussions and arguments. Although changing of the world is giving us more opportunity and more convinient life, as fas as I am concerned, I would still agree that these changes making our life unhappy. Even though there stand hundreds of reasons behind my preference, I would only explore some of them here.
First of my reasoning would be that more working hours. Especially, these days people tend to work longer than before because of changes of the world. And most companies let their employee to work more harder to get over each other. But this situation brings people more unhappy life with no time for their family and freinds. For example, this is happing in my real life with my sister. She works in one of the top company of my country which insist their workers to do more things in less time or more things in more time. As a result, she spend less time with her family maybe twice in a week. This example illustrate the result of overwork.
Furthermore, in addition to overwork, we also loose our health by eating junk foods. I have never seen a person who is happy when they get ill. Few decades before, we used to cook in kitchen together and eat healthy food even it takes a long time, but now to save time we are eating junk foods because we have no time to prepare dinner. And it is obvious that fast food do not have enough nutritions and vitamins for healthy organism. For instance, there is an good example of fat people who always eat fast food such as McDonalds, Burgerking. Most of there people have any kind of disease which limit their life little by little. Busy life with deseace.
Last but not least, in this paragraph I want to share my opinion about satisfaction of life, especially kids. These changing world we have no time to prepare dinner, no time for family also no time for kids to play with them. This consequence makes our children to play video games which makes them unsatisfied anytime except new version of game. For example, few days before I prepared gift for my nephew who is just 5 years old, the gift was a Super-Man small figure. But when I give my present for him, he did not accept my gift, he wants me to buy new version of his video game instead. This is very sorrowful that even this changes makes our kids less satisfied.
Therefore, when it comes to the statement that whether because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with lives than people were in the past, as far as there offered a choice I would strongly agree with the statement without any doubt.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 197, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'harder' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: harder
...st companies let their employee to work more harder to get over each other. But this situat...
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Line 2, column 542, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
...e things in more time. As a result, she spend less time with her family maybe twice i...
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Line 2, column 610, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'illustrates'.
Suggestion: illustrates
...ily maybe twice in a week. This example illustrate the result of overwork. Furthermore, i...
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Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...rmore, in addition to overwork, we also loose our health by eating junk foods. I have...
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Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ealthy organism. For instance, there is an good example of fat people who always e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2213.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 490.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51632653061 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26890778216 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510204081633 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 694.8 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9180276975 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.52 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.24 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298636106389 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810459850646 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127296252508 0.0737576698707 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224005350313 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.204840956551 0.0645574589148 317% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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